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Reviewer: breastclimber Signed [Report This]
Date: January 31 2024 5:18 AM Title: A Night at the Theater

Fun as always!

I know this is beyond the scope of your current plans,   but I would love to see the Old Kingdom do a surprise attack and actually temporarily win.   They could start converting earth males from bonded to non-bonded including Steven, and it would be up to Allura to save him!   

Just found one typo in this chapter:

error / fixed

glard / glared



Author's Response:

Typo fixed!

The Old Kingdom will make a move soon, and while they probably won't take Earth, they might take a certain Earth man...

Reviewer: Barachiel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 30 2024 4:30 AM Title: A Night at the Theater

Great chapter! Very tense at times. Hopefully the Old Kingdom Ambassador gets to make good on some of those offers to Steven.

Author's Response:

They're definitely into some earth men themselves!

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