[Report This]Date: January 27 2024 7:08 PM Title: Lost In A Crowd, Alone, and Drinking My Third
A great story so far, although it's not quite as charming as Fear and Delight (so far!). However, I still love your descriptive ability and pacing, and the fact that you've built a world with just enough detail to allow for a suspension of disbelief without going overboard, and characters who don't behave like they're in a porn film.
I hope we get to see how it ends some time. For a moment I expected Beck to come back as Simon jumped into Ash's mouth and think he was cheating on her!
Is Sweet Little Temptations on sale anywhere else? It's tempting, but I generally avoid Amazon.
[Report This]Date: December 16 2023 8:16 AM Title: Live From Studio H
Wow, that was some incredible lead up and a gripping cliffhanger in the final chapter. Love the overall buildup and characterization of Ash. Well done!
(Any thoughts on when we may see a conclusion? :P)
Date: September 02 2023 9:24 AM Title: Lost In A Crowd, Alone, and Drinking My Third
This chapter was so hot!
Date: August 23 2023 7:16 PM Title: Trust In Me
Welcome back glad you are righting again!
Date: August 09 2023 7:06 AM Title: Live From Studio H
Fear and Delight was great, I’m excited to read the sequel! Good start!