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Reviewer: Iunno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 13 2024 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 13

Very fun story. Was happy it had a happy ending. Tbh didn't expect one when I saw the last chapter. Tho, I guess that goes to show that Liza was right about Mia being too lax. Then again, that was probably how she got Mia in on the operation anyway.

Everything made perfect sense and came around quite nicely. Loved it



Author's Response:

Appreciate the review, thanks!

Reviewer: breastclimber Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 11 2024 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 13

Well, I really enjoyed the 2 stories you posted on this website.   I liked the creativity of the "hardgum" mechanic, the plots to overcome it, and the eventual harrowing escape.    I thought the plotting of the story was really solid the entire way through.   It might have been nice to see some voluntary action at the end with the guards who believe in freedom of choice, but hey, it's a good solid ending.


Thanks for posting these here, really appreciate it.



Author's Response:

I also thought about adding something at the end there, but oh well. I figured Garrick was veeeery tired by that point.


Appreciate the words, happy you enjoyed it!

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