[Report This]Date: August 10 2023 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Who Is Jacob?
Author's Response:
Who ever said Blaires father was linked to Gullivette? ;)
LOL you can never be relaxed and assume where this story will lead I have learned that early on. During the call with Jinshin in the last chapter and the knowledge of who this person is now in this chapter one must wonder how this man knows Gullivette and how he even knows of her existence and the shrunken people at all. This man has some connections that reach just as deep at Avaramix if not deeper. The questions in my mind is enormous.
Is this man (Blaire's Father) part of the original organization that did testing on Gullivette and Jacob, if not how does he know about their abilities?
How does he know that his daughter could help them find Gullivette?
Does her know that Blaire is seeing Jacob and if he has this deep connections then why doesn't he know?
Author's Response:
As for Blaire, that poor and innocent woman, will Jinshin be gentle with her? Hehehe.
I sure hope she is gentle with her, I understand she has trust issues and can't let her guard down but hopefully it turns around after she learns more from her.
Great job bringing this story to us and keeping it fresh and intriguing.
[Report This]Date: August 10 2023 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Who Is Jacob?
This is a nice turn and refreshing to switch to another portion of the story. Blaire is such a sleuth. Searching into all the missing person cases in Valdez. For a small town of 3,900+ 20 missing persons should be more alarming to the police. For the authorities to be this complacent you would think maybe there could be a connection between the police and this nefarious organization.
Blaire’s, mind is baffled, and she is now wondering who the man is she shared a bed with. The unease she must be feeling. It will be interesting to see how Jacob tries to turn this around. Will Blaire end up as a victim as well in this saga? Time will tell.
Back to Jacob, Avaramix and Deita very interesting conversation between Avaramix and Jacob concerning everything going on in Valdez and the condition of Deita. Her wounds are severe. Hearing that she may have lost the will to live is interesting. The betrayal of Jinshin causing this in an intriguing concept.
I love how you have each character have their own agenda that sometimes conflicts with the others. It is wise for Jacob to question his position in the organization and prepare for the worse scenario.
Okay, that was an exceptionally unexpected turn. Blaire is the contact the caller set up. I am at a loss for words but now my interest is even more peaked. There will be a lot of questions and answers Blaire and Jinshin will be going through with each other. WOW! Great job at throwing this curve ball out of nowhere.
Wow OMG her father knew all along where she was at! At the realization here chills went up my spine amazing! I am not normally at a loss for words but OMG!
Great way to end this chapter and keeping the interest level peaked! Very interesting how Blaire's family is linked with Gullivette.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Who ever said Blaires father was linked to Gullivette? ;)
In regards to Blaires character, she's been wholly out of the scene and basically on the sidelines without a clue as to what was happening around her until now...
That being said, as we reach the awaited reunion of Anna and Jacob, I am very excited to start unveiling the final curveballs as I start tying everything together at the start of volume III.
Needless to say, we are almost at the end of volume II. There will be one more bonus chapter this volume featuring the poll results I've had going for the last several chapters.
As for Blaire, that poor and innocent woman, will Jinshin be gentle with her? Hehehe.