[Report This]Date: August 06 2023 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Atonement
The cliffhanger of an ending in the previous chapter left us all wondering how this will all turn out for Jinshin and Ben. The start of this chapter opens with another great flashback allowing us an opportunity to learn more about how the relationship evolved between Jinshin and Deita. I didn’t realize Deita had been with the organization longer than Jinshin until now. I just assumed due to her demeanor she was the senior (Not in age but seniority) between the two.
The interaction between Jinshin and Ben was heart warming and gave me chills as we transitioned to Deita and Liz. This was the culmination of all the build-up over the previous chapters leading us to this moment. The anticipation of Liz and her final moment as a person and how she felt as she was transitioned into a snack for this evil woman.
This chapter gave ne chills as the previous chapter. What a story and now we are left with wondering how in the how in the holy short people are we going to get out of here.
Anticipating the next installment and where we go from here.
Will Jinshin, Ben and Liz make it out alive?
Will they be caught and if so will Jinshin be shrunk and handed over to Deita for disposal?
Will Liz see her father again before Avaramix and his cronies come knocking?
There are so many possibilities that await us, it is unfathomable.
I am intrigued to see where you take us on the next journey.
Author's Response:
Next chapter could end up being the longest yet. Gonna be a good one!
>:D