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Date: August 03 2023 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Wrath Of Jinshin

Won't be surprised if Deita falls in love with Liz.....or at least becomes her friend. 



Author's Response:

That would certainly be an unexpected twist! Sadly, as it seems so far, Deita appears rather set on devouring her, especially now that Jacob rejected her feelings towards him, seems Liz will be the tool of Deita to lash out her feelings...

Poor Liz, guess we'll see her fate unfold soon enough :(

Thanks for reading! And thanks for taking time to share your thoughts <3

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Date: August 03 2023 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Wrath Of Jinshin

Wow! this is by far one of my favorite chapters in this saga. 

The interruption of the finale for poor Liz allows her another moment to contemplate her heart wrenching end in the stomach of this evil Deita. 

   I was taken a little back when we found out Avaramix knew of Ben's intrusion into the lab. The berating he gave Deita and Jinshin was an eye opener for them both. 

After Deita left the room we hear Avaramix have a more personal discussion with Jinshin and she finds out her true purpose to Avaramix and his organization. 

This jumps us back to when Jinshin was younger and a captive in another organization. Her being just a product in the eyes of that organization made her see the similarities to what she was to Avaramix and this organization. 

The flashback was enlightening for the reader as well as we are able to understand why she has this protective affinity towards Ben. This makes me as a reader have an overwhelming empathy for her. l feel that much more connected to her and Ben's story.

Jinshin understands now that she is no different than those shrinkies in the eyes of Avaramix and how he will turn his back on her as soon as her usefulness has run its course. 

 There are moments in every good story that makes the reader feel this is a turning point and the story has been taken to the next level. I would say that this is the chapter that has done this for me. I have been enamored with the story arc of Jinshin and Ben from the beginning and this chapter has been that moment for me.

Don't get me wrong I do like the story arc of Deita, Gullivette, Jacob and Becca and all the other cast in this story I just have been so drawn to Jinshin and Ben on a more personal level. Their story just seems to have a more resounding spark I can't put my finger on just yet.

WOW! What an amazing chapter. I am at a loss for words as the possibilities for alternative outcomes is endless. 

Will Jinshin try and save Ben once and for all and will this be her demise? Will her usefulness in this organization end and will Avaramix decide to have Jacob shrink her and give her to the evil Deita for elimination.

Or,

Will she actually save Ben and turn the tables on this evil organization bringing the walls down around them. Will she be the crack in the foundation that would ultimately end this organization. Can she be the unexpected hero?

I am so looking forward to the next installment and still ancally waiting for the finality of Liz or will Deita have a change of heart toward her as well the story never ceases to amaze me.

GREAT JOB on a GREAT chapter!

10+ rating on this one

 





Author's Response:

Oh boy, this was an unexpected reaction! I felt like I was rushing but at the same time I greatly enjoyed writing this chapter. I took an anime style move with the shift to the past and I plan on doing that more very soon.

Looking forward to the mid volume finale ;)

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