[Report This]Date: July 30 2023 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 7 - The Missing
Nice to see a story this morning,
Okay now I was caught off guard with Blaire having her nightmare. Interesting concept and opens a whole new avenue where she’s able to tap into the mind of Jacob. I am intrigued how you integrated Jacob’s nightmare into Her’s and gave us just a little more from the previous victim’s fate.
Jacob’s lies coming back to haunt him as all lies will eventually circle around to grab you harshly. Blaire’s morning jog is very enlightening for her, and her eventual sleuthing will either uncover more ominous information or she may find herself in trouble.
This chapter was a great lead up to what may be heading our way.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
So glad to see you! Always happy to hear your thoughts :D
All lies rely on the shadow to remain hidden, but when the veil of light is cast upon shadow, the lies are scattered and exposed!
Needless to say, we are definitely building up to something, aren't we? I'll admit, I'm at the point where I find myself re-reading previous chapters to ensure I have the details correct. I have multiple plot threads I'm weaving right now. We still have no clue what fate will become of Liz, I'll admit I've postponed her climactic scene a bit because I wanted to lay out more for the other characters first. I'm pleased to say this will change very soon, I just need to weave a few more threads first. With Jinshin and Ben, now Blaire and her newfound revelation, how will Jacob be tossed in the middle of all this? Then there's the question still of how Gullivette will play into all of this. So far she's only had what, two appearances?
In any case, despite how busy my work is right now, I'll do everything I can to keep getting chapters out and make sure they're congruent to the storyline!
Look forward to seeing you in the next one! If you ever would like to chat on discord feel free to hit me up!