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Date: July 21 2023 3:55 AM Title: ~Volume II~ Chapter 1 - Who Is Gullivette?

Well, here is volume II

Okay, now we have some drama cooking with the missing girl. How will Blaire start to wonder and question Jacob and what his reaction will be to her questions?

Interesting to read how Jacob responds to the knowledge of Liz’s proposed fate. The analogy of the farmer and their cattle is interesting. I’m wondering if he is hiding his true feelings or if he really has no empathy for Liz. He knows she doesn’t deserve this horrible fate but seems to really turn his back on her. It is a shame for her fate to be swallowed as any other snack digested and turned into this evil woman’s waste and then forgotten like any other food item.

This is a good build up chapter to the eventual meeting we will most definitely be seeing between Gullivette and Jacob. Interesting how Jacob lies about knowing this new antagonist that has appeared.

Looking forward to the next chapters to see more into the life between Jinshin and Ben. Although it is a sad turn for Liz I’m interested in the depths Deita will go with her depravity toward Liz and how the story will go for Liz when she understands what her demise will be.

Looking forward to the next chapter. 



Author's Response:

Ha! Behold! My plan with Blaire this entire time mwah ha ha ha! But yes, if it wasn't obvious, we can see where this little scene will end up leading towards :)

My biggest goal has to really make Jacob a complex mystery to the readers. Of course they all hate him, he is clearly NOT a good person, however what are his intentions? His desires? It's clear he doesn't entirely care about the money, yet he accepts it. He makes it clear he doesn't really care about people, and yet anything to do with Blaire and he's willing to jump off a cliff. Now Liz is resurfacing in his world, unexpectedly, as Deita has made her a pet, with a time limit. Will be very fun to reveal how this all pans out!

Oh trust me, nobody is more excited for the initial face to face of Jacob and Gullivette than I am, I've been planning that specific chapter in my head since the first chapter of the first volume. In fact, a little tidbit of fun information, Gullivette as a character is what sparked this story to begin with! The one from that show, some small animals end up there, and I liked the idea of Gullivette (albeit maybe not as a child, that was weird for the show and I found it off putting, but the idea itself struck Nefarious into my head). Voila, Annie was born.

Yeah, I haven't clarified in the story (on purpose of course) but so far it has not been confirmed if Deita has revealed her desire to Liz or not. It has been delayed, we know that much, but no additional details have been revealed.

That will all be changing very soon <3

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