[Report This]Date: July 14 2023 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Dilemma
This is very interesting to read into Blaire’s family and her actions when she left. Although she tries to come across as innocent, she most definitely has a past she is hiding. I’m sure we will be reading more about her family and their enterprise. I can just imagine who their connections are and if they intertwine with Avaramix and his dark organization.
Although Jacob is an evil character in his own right, he does show a little humanity for Blaire. Normally individuals with a narcissistic personality such as Jacob would not show empathy toward anyone. I can understand he may also have a protective attribute toward Blaire that is hard for him to overcome.
During their initial argument between Blaire and Charles at the food wagon I sensed Jacob would utilize his ability to eliminate the threat Charles made about contacting her family. I just wonder what he would do with the Charles after, maybe give him to Blaire without her knowledge. Maybe place him in her food or something that would have her eating him. There could be some ramifications for doing something like that though as there has to be some form of paper trail of him being in Valdez and none of him leaving.
It will be interesting to see how he plans to handle the situation.
Although in a perverse sort of way it is nice to see Jinshin and Deita making amends.
Ben’s request totally caught me off guard, I was not expecting this. Now I am intrigued as to how Jinshin handles this dilemma, will she hold to her promise earlier and kill him or will she find a way to keep him? Interesting turn of events to say the least. I guess we will see how she really feels about him as it seems she has been put on the spot.
As always you have brought another great chapter that keeps the reader on edge.
Looking forward to the next chapter and where this journey takes us.
Author's Response:
As I get closer to chapter 13 I become increasingly excited. While my first story ever, I'm really hoping the story shows to be on par. I'm hoping my readers are satisfied so far, it's hard to tell sometimes.