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Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 08 2023 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Deita's Desires

Considering about the crowd thing, and with how cruel things could be getting, some cult or club or rich couple could ask instead fir the shrinking as a service, they bring some set people and have them shrunk. The cult could set up a comparably small compound for the shrunken followers, with tiers of tinies, while the nomral/big leaders get to enjoy them. They might even be delusional enough to think their in legit heaven or paradise(plus with the right setup they could still do some real work and bring in money). Or in a terrarium. Or just straining them out in some garden or forest, then hunt or have an enter tiny tribe/village setup that worships them, mostly normal hiking/woods cloths combined with Sorel Cate the Great Wedges is a good aesthetic.
And in the couple(s) idea, one wants so be small, or got tricked by one or twi others into thinking/agreeing to it, and they now have the shrunken person. Maybe it also to permanently disappear, maybe it so they are permanently disappeared. 

Author's Response:

This reminds me of a game with a similar system, it's given me some ideas for later in the story. Thank you!

And thanks for reading :)

Reviewer: Alpha Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 08 2023 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Deita's Desires

Now we are starting to see the action. Deita sure has an evil streak in her and this allows us to delve into her mind and understand her much better. I really enjoy how you bring out each character's personality. I'm interested in following Liz through her journey of the underworld. I am interested in where we are at with Alicia & Camilla and flushing out their world and where they are at. You have a great concept here and I'm intrigued.   



Author's Response:

I'm really happy you liked it! I also love this concept and I have many ideas in mind. Liz will be a recurring character unlike most of the victims in this story, she serves a purpose later in the story.

Next chapter will be brief filler and context, and the 6th chapter will shift back to Alicia's fate in the hands of beatty Camilla, very excited!

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