Date: July 05 2023 9:29 PM Title: 01. Lucky cookies!
Welcome back, Milla!!! :D
Hmm… it's usually tinies who try to imagine what a giantess would think. It's fun to see it done the other way around!
Nice idea. I love how Alisha is able to read Hector's thoughts, and how for most of the story we don't know for sure what truly occurred. The truth is revealed to us in the last scene where Alisha pats her belly.
Hector has fulfilled his ultimate fantasy, but he is to pay the price: He will now be digested alive and absorbed by Alisha; his entire body will be dissolved and reduced to nutrients for the beautiful woman of shrinking powers. Good job!
And again… It's just so good to see you back!!! ;)
Thank you ^^! I'm happy I'm back too, it's nice to be able to write again!
Yeah, i tried to keep the reason a secret until the last paragraph, but I guess I let some details slip during the mouthplay lol...
Yeah, it'll be harsh as digestion goes on, the story doesn't show this part but it's now unavoidable... at least he'll become part of a woman he enjoyed to be eaten by :D
And again, thank you for enjoying my work, there are more already posted, and yet more to be posted.
Date: July 04 2023 11:00 PM Title: 01. Lucky cookies!
This was fun to read. I like the sorta-rambling style of the narration as Hector processes the whole experience. The stream of consciousness works well to convey the guy's fantasies coming true.
Thank you so much, I tried to make his emotions clear during the narration. Hopefully I did a good job in that ^^"
Date: July 04 2023 8:13 PM Title: 01. Lucky cookies!
Pretty good for a first effort. Keep at it kid. You have some potential. :)
Just kidding, of course. Looking forward to the posting of your stories, old and new.
Hehehe despite having published stories for some months in the past, I still consider myself a newbie so your encouraging words sort of echo in my mind. Thank you for seeing potential in my work, hopefully they get better with time lol.
I'll be posting my new and older stories as soon as they are ready, without forcing me to write too much, though. Maybe once a week or so?
Date: July 04 2023 7:45 PM Title: 01. Lucky cookies!
So she knew his desires, read his mind perhaps, and made them come true.
Yeah, not every vore fan can have the luck to meet a woman with such abilities, but Hector did! Lucky man, but now he's digested~
Date: July 04 2023 2:49 PM Title: 01. Lucky cookies!
You have no idea how happy I am to see you post on here again, Milla. I'm sure I'm not the only one here saying this but you have been sorely missed!
As for the story it was throughly detailed, as always, and I especially liked the description of Hector in the cookie bag. I could clearly picture it in my head, what else would you want?!
But I gotta say, my favourite quote was "even her gurgles excite me as they show me where I am in the food chain compared to that woman". Boys are food and nothing better than being plunged in a stomach full of cookies to make you aware of that...
10/10 I can't wait to read your next awesome story!
Wow, thank you, JRamos! I'm really happy to be here publishing stories again and contributing to the site and to the GTS community as a whole.
Well, I try my best in describing the scenes and emotions, despite not being an English native, so I'm happy that my words really did the job of translating the situations to you! I can only wish I can improve more to give more and better descriptions!
Hehehe, yeah, men have a special place in our stomachs <3~
Okay, I only hope my other stories are as enjoyable as this one ^^"
Date: July 04 2023 2:16 PM Title: 01. Lucky cookies!
I'll preface this with the fact that I'm so glad to see you back. There's no amount of words that would do justice conveying that feeling. I'm just really happy to hear you've managed to pull through <3
Anyways, onto the aaaactual review. Your pacing is as good as I remember. There's not a bit of detail in it that I felt the story could do without, and as far as I can tell, that's a point that most writers here miss. You shine just as well in other areas, be it your phrasing, or sentence structure. Even my nitpicky self can appreciate it all ~
All in all, I really hope to see more from you again! <3
Ellenoire!! <3 Thank you for your kind words, I'm so happy too! I thought it was the end for me but well, thanks God I'm here, safe and sound :D
Also, thank you for enjoying my work and write style, it makes me more comfortable with the way I write. You know, there are so many good writers here, including you, and it's impossible for me not to compare myself. I'll improve everyday, of course, but I'm happy I'm already pleasing you with my stories.
I plan to post a new story per week or so, and I already posted another one, so every now and then, there will be another story here. :)