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Reviewer: TerryLarka Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 27 2024 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 4

Still impressed with how well you detail the difference in scale and power between Avalee and the fairies. The way you describe her simply holding Willow is already tantalizing enough before we even get to the vore scenes. The absolute contempt Avalee shows towards fairies is striking, and it's interesting seeing how she rationalizes sparing Willow (for now, at least) and the small bursts of sympathy crack through her uncaring shell. Good job on continuing the great work!



Author's Response:

Hi! Thank you so much, I feel like scale and handling is such an important aspect of the fetish for me which I don't see a ton of emphasis on. I'm really happy that Avalee's character is shining through the way you describe, it means I'm doing something right! 

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