Reviews For Journeyman
You must login (register) to review.
Reviewer: ZeR0x Signed [Report This]
Date: October 22 2009 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 1: Overpopulation really bites

I like it a lot, just work a bit on structure, but i love it!

Author's Response: Thank you very much :D

Reviewer: rahu Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 21 2009 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 1: Overpopulation really bites

I like the start and the setting a lot, would love to see more.

Author's Response:

Plan on seeing more my friend :)

Thank you so much for the review...i need to know if i'm doing well so i know what i need to improve on.

Reviewer: 29238 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 18 2009 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 1: Overpopulation really bites

great start!!!

Reviewer: Olerpa Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 17 2009 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 1: Overpopulation really bites

It looks good so far. I'm interested in seeing what will happen next. Can't wait.

Reviewer: Solar Crimson Signed [Report This]
Date: October 16 2009 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 1: Overpopulation really bites

Interesting start! While I love the idea of being shrunken in the presence of a cute girl, I share the protagonist's feelings about the world he lives in. Weird. lol

Author's Response: Couldn't agree with you more my friend. Next chapter might be a little slower....I'm hoping that my audience doesnt leave me because of it :(. Thank you for the support.

Author's Response: Couldn't agree with you more my friend. Next chapter might be a little slower....I'm hoping that my audience doesnt leave me because of it :(. Thank you for the support.

Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: October 16 2009 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 1: Overpopulation really bites

Good opening. Just how over-populated is the world if men are shrunk to ant size? Seems excessive (but hot!). The rebirth of Athena worship is an interesting touch.

One suggestion: You should have more of a description in the Summary so people know what they're getting into.



Author's Response: Oh ok :). When I wrote the summery I thought that was a place for author's notes lol

Reviewer: tinyslave Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 15 2009 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 1: Overpopulation really bites

I like it! sounds like a good start for an excelent story!

Author's Response:

Thank you very much :D

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 15 2009 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 1: Overpopulation really bites

Not a bad opening chapter. Although, you might want to separate the paragraphs a little more legibly.

Author's Response: I know...I need to figure out how to get the spacing correctly when pasting in on here.

You must login (register) to review.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.