Date: August 08 2010 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 2
I enjoy the story so far! Please! Please! Please hurry and put a new chapter!
[Report This]Date: October 25 2009 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 2
Uh-oh! Looks like the nurse has decided to take him for herself! I wonder how Allen will make it to Liz...
Date: October 25 2009 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 2
Hope to see some feet soon! Nice story!
Author's Response: Believe me sir; my favorite kind of gts is feet XD! So believe me you will see what you want in the chapters to come.
Date: October 22 2009 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 1: Overpopulation really bites
I like it a lot, just work a bit on structure, but i love it!
Author's Response: Thank you very much :D
[Report This]Date: October 21 2009 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 1: Overpopulation really bites
I like the start and the setting a lot, would love to see more.
Author's Response:
Plan on seeing more my friend :)
Thank you so much for the review...i need to know if i'm doing well so i know what i need to improve on.
[Report This]Date: October 18 2009 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 1: Overpopulation really bites
great start!!!
[Report This]Date: October 17 2009 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 1: Overpopulation really bites
It looks good so far. I'm interested in seeing what will happen next. Can't wait.
Date: October 16 2009 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 1: Overpopulation really bites
Interesting start! While I love the idea of being shrunken in the presence of a cute girl, I share the protagonist's feelings about the world he lives in. Weird. lol
Author's Response: Couldn't agree with you more my friend. Next chapter might be a little slower....I'm hoping that my audience doesnt leave me because of it :(. Thank you for the support.
Author's Response: Couldn't agree with you more my friend. Next chapter might be a little slower....I'm hoping that my audience doesnt leave me because of it :(. Thank you for the support.
Date: October 16 2009 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 1: Overpopulation really bites
Good opening. Just how over-populated is the world if men are shrunk to ant size? Seems excessive (but hot!). The rebirth of Athena worship is an interesting touch.
One suggestion: You should have more of a description in the Summary so people know what they're getting into.
Author's Response: Oh ok :). When I wrote the summery I thought that was a place for author's notes lol
[Report This]Date: October 15 2009 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 1: Overpopulation really bites
I like it! sounds like a good start for an excelent story!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much :D
[Report This]Date: October 15 2009 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 1: Overpopulation really bites
Not a bad opening chapter. Although, you might want to separate the paragraphs a little more legibly.
Author's Response: I know...I need to figure out how to get the spacing correctly when pasting in on here.