Reviews For Sink or Swim
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Reviewer: TaylorHill_1923 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 18 2023 8:39 PM Title: Sink or Swim

https://youtu.be/CpjH9M2SYsk



Author's Response:

Hahaha! That made my day! Thanks a ton, I’m glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: Surabu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 16 2023 9:00 PM Title: Sink or Swim

Amazin story, I wonder if it was a oneshot or if there will be more chapters.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I left the ending with the potential for further chapters, maybe even exploring different sports. But for now, I am working on a different project. 

Reviewer: bubsboy81 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 16 2023 5:48 AM Title: Sink or Swim

Amazing story. The premise is so unique and the way you kept the mystery of Mrs. Larsons methods ongoing hooked me in. Also your descriptions and sound effects really made the scene come alive. 

And what a novel way to end a "full tour!" 



Author's Response:

Thank you very much! I enjoy reading descriptive sound effects myself in stories so I thought I would add them in my own. I’m glad it wasn’t overkill. 

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