A pool boy, huh? What, was the pizza delivery guy too busy?

But seriously, this was a fun little one-shot. I'm always amazed at just how quickly you're able to make your characters stand out from one another and engage the reader in a fun way.

In particular, I enjoyed the contrast between Sofia and Cynthia regarding their attitudes toward Parker. Sofia seemed more carefree with him, really just having fun playing with him. Cynthia, on the other hand, while also having the same carefree spirit one would expect of a cliché rich girl, repeatedly checks on Parker (something Sofia doesn't think to do once), even if she keeps her smug mentality as she does so.

That contrast really helps highlight Cynthia's interest in Parker, which is pretty subtly hinted at throughout the story. She's interested enough in him to make sure he's enjoying being tiny. She even wanted to grow him back pretty much right away, showing that shrinking was really just her way of getting his attention. I also like how hesitant she was when Sofia stuffed him inside her and how she was mildly annoyed after the fact, implying that while Cynthia enjoyed him in there, she would have rather not gone that far with him, at least not before getting to know him better (or at least making sure he was into it) first.

Having the way Parker's reactions to the girls' games serving as the building blocks of his budding relationship with Cynthia was also a nice touch. It seemed that the more enthusiastic and brave Parker was, the more into him Cynthia was. Again, the subtlety with which you establish this, without clearly spelling it out directly, is very rewarding to read.

But yeah, this was a really enjoyable quick read!

Amazing story! I love all three characters, and how they build on each other. I hope to see more chapters of these three, and maybe a building romance between all three?

Realy goood! 👌