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Reviewer: rubber Signed [Report This]
Date: September 27 2023 5:05 PM Title: Trophy Hunting

great story.

Reviewer: chicletsized30 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 23 2023 10:56 PM Title: Trophy Hunting

Please continue, this is one of my favorite stories of all time.  

Reviewer: EchoofZen Signed [Report This]
Date: August 21 2023 3:25 AM Title: A Helping Hand

Wondering if you are going to continue this. Also wondering if he's gonna meet a violent end or if he's gonna be permanently enslaved.

Reviewer: markmueller Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 04 2023 9:06 PM Title: Trophy Hunting

Thanks for the addition!

All this smelly stuff isnt mine so I will just leave it out, exept, yeah,I´d say ist pretty obvious now.

She caught him with her sock and treated him in her shoe.

She stepping around and over him, becomming wet by that is another clue for him that there is something going on with his caretaker.

By the way, I love these accustic clues he gets in the evnings.

Im not sure, could the tention rise until it beaks inside her like a dam? She just grabbing him and grinding him raw under and inside her?

Is there one more thing she could "pretend" to mask the obvious? Ah- yes, she takes him on a ride, stored somewhere under her clothes where he may not be noticed by the reat of the world.

Hiding him inside her shoe under her arch might be to rough and hard, but slipping him inside her panties, that would even mach his previous daydream. 

Ah, i should stop and let you lead the way ;) Still enjoying this story very much.

Reviewer: Gokuto Signed [Report This]
Date: June 22 2023 12:40 AM Title: Trophy Hunting

Damn this is really good. I’m really looking forward to see where things go. 

Reviewer: V11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 21 2023 9:13 AM Title: Trophy Hunting

I'm really enjoying this! You're covering a lot of ground fast and I appreciate the psychological details. It's been a while since I've found a story to look forward to when it gets updated. I'm glad I opened it up and read it. Keep at it, you're doing great!

Reviewer: Underfoottiny Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 20 2023 6:47 PM Title: Trophy Hunting

Awesome chapter. Keep turning up the heat, I love it!

Reviewer: markmueller Signed [Report This]
Date: June 19 2023 11:27 PM Title: Meals and Mush

Allthrough she seemed not to have stepped on purpose into the food she obviously enjoys playing around this fact.

For him the question must arise if she has a similar devotion to her feet, but in her case rather on the giving and dominating side.

One can only guess that these moans on the end of the day mean she is masturbating.

What is she thinking while doing so?

Is it connected to him? Must not, but if indeed, seems to be same kind of odd like his unfaithful mind concerning her daughter.

Are they both gow awry with theyr thoughts?

I cant baerly wait for the next chapter.

Allthrough I would love to see him getting modlded in and entombed into her soft sole I love all this toying around, teasing and all these "accidents" spicing it up.

Please keep up your great work and thanks for sharing again!

Reviewer: markmueller Signed [Report This]
Date: June 15 2023 5:23 PM Title: A Helping Hand

You created a very nice setup with this story!

This cautious and stepwise aproach is very teasing, all this fiddling around, him putting these specs under her foot, her lettung him scrub it of underneath ist, i love it all. 

What cought me most yet was how she put her whole soft foot on top of him and pressing him into the carpet so casual.

There are clips where you can see woman like her stepping anround and playing with theyr feet, how sometimes the soft soles mold round small objects and enguf them, how they play and tease, and when they slowly step down and you can see the whole foot spread out slightly under the weight, sometimes in the garden when the whole foot sinks into the ground slightly and you see the earth rise besides the foot to escape the pressure... sorry I get lost.

There is so much potential due to the basic setting, beginning with his girlfriend away for 6 months!!!, she could find someone else out there in the mean time.

Her mother on the other hand had him as a helping hand and he turned suddendly into a liability. How will she think about her daughter getting engaged with a mouse?

Will she imagine her daughters sexlive with her stepson? all the implications? Young girls can get quit worked up while in the act, how will this work out with her mousesized friend?

Somehow it seems tempting to spare her daughter the burden of this relationship and take matters in her own hands, even if someone might feel trodden upon by her decisions....

And obviously, her feet interacting with him seems to have a plesurable side for her aswell.

I really lokking forward to the next chapters! thanks for sharing!






Author's Response:

It’s going to be a very slow buildup, and then hopefully many scenes that people enjoy, but I’m trying to make the transition as “realistic” as I can, so it has to happen slow. But oh yes, their sizes will affect their psychology, and the mother will have plenty to say about the future, although it may be different from what you’re thinking. 

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 14 2023 8:47 PM Title: Meals and Mush

No feedback on the previous chapters because I was too busy reading them... wow, wow, wow!!!



Author's Response:

Hahaha oh I understand. Writing these chapters has been very fun for me, but I fall deep down the rabbit hole every time. Glad it seems to be as entertains to read as it is to write!

Reviewer: Jay1236527 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 13 2023 10:34 PM Title: Meals and Mush

Absolutely Amazing. Best story i have read !



Author's Response:

That is a night fine complement for this website! Check out plenty of the popular works on here, there’s some truly amazing stuff out there! But again, thank you very much!

Reviewer: EchoofZen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 13 2023 9:39 PM Title: Meals and Mush

Have to admit, I'm loving the casual powerplays so far. Only wish this had more chapters!



Author's Response:

The casual power of someone so much larger is one of the hottest aspects of size in general, and I’m really doing my best to paint that picture here. I’m glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: chicletsized30 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 13 2023 5:18 PM Title: Meals and Mush

Another excellent chapter!  This is some of the best character progression I’ve ever read.  I love how he bows to her jokingly, hopefully it’s a bit of foreshadowing to her future expectations!



Author's Response:

I am genuinely touched you reviewed separate chapters here, and I want you to know I appreciate it a lot. I’m trying to include the sort of stuff that slowly slide down that slippery slope into true domination. 

Reviewer: Underfoottiny Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 12 2023 4:30 PM Title: Being Alone is Boring

Very good writing so far, love how you’re slowly transforming your characters. 



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoy it! Hopefully by the end the transformation will come off as believable, yet the depths of the change be shocking. Much more to come. 

Reviewer: chicletsized30 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 12 2023 6:25 AM Title: A Helping Hand

One of the best stories I’ve read in a long time.  Please continue and keep up the amazing work.  I love love love the character development and progression so far.



Author's Response:

Super glad you enjoy it! The story outline I have is twenty thousand words, so I hope you’re ready for a slow burn. But the characters will progress greatly by the very end. 

Reviewer: Littlelee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 12 2023 6:14 AM Title: A Helping Hand

Oh wow, this story is amazing! Can’t wait for it to continue. Hope the mother in law starts to become wise to his little fetish.

Fantastic work!



Author's Response:

She will, most definitely. And there will be consequences for the both of them. 

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