Date: May 25 2023 10:35 PM Title: 2
I choose b! Never give up!
Author's Response:
Very brave!
[Report This]Date: May 25 2023 8:13 PM Title: 2
In that case, as much as I'd like to tie things up and make it interesting, I think I have to go with A here.
Also, I can't blame you for having predetermined routes planned for each option, and that doesn't make this less interesting, but if you're willing to incorporate some of our rationale somewhere down the line, that would be awesome! I do understand that can lead to a lot of extra effort, though.
Author's Response:
We'll see! As it is, the chapters are sometimes small so I may need to flesh a few out a bit to fit the minimum word count here, so anything is possible. But overall I hope the options given will offer a reasonable choice in general.
[Report This]Date: May 24 2023 5:30 PM Title: 2
Great story so far! I'm voting [A] for this chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: May 24 2023 3:52 PM Title: 2
I'm liking this choose your own adventure format. I'm normally not big into second-person narratives, but the interactive component makes it feel appropriate here, and this story has been pretty immersive thus far just through your writing style, which helps as well.
I'm curious, do you already have predetermined routes worked out for each option, or might the logic and reasoning voters give potentially help shape how you move forward with the next chapter? Not so much that the voters dictate how exactly what the character does or how they implement that logic and reasoning, but would they be considered moving forward, if that makes any sense.
That may be a factor in which option I vote for.
Anyway, great start to this story, and I look forward to seeing where it goes!
Author's Response:
Good question! For this one right now it's predetermined, so the route's already there. But I do like that idea for the future, might be good to do something more dynamic like that (it'd just require a bit more time around it!).
Date: May 24 2023 2:44 PM Title: 2
It might not seem like much, but we were able to elevate our position from the floor into being level with projects at our boss’s hands. Although, it seems like it’s not the most comfortable place to be in. I guess the grass is always greener on the other side.
Furthermore, we might have misinterpreted our newfound dynamic with our boss considering how she responded to our increased courage. Perhaps it would be best to acclimate ourselves to our new place in the office culture, before making any big moves.
Thus, I will be going with option [A] once more.
Author's Response:
A very reasonable response, thanks for sharing!