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Reviewer: akilmilo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19 2023 1:04 AM Title: Orbital Annihilation

I mean, death or being killed off by zombies aren't considered anything horrible in an apocalypse. At most it's average.  As for what bad ending can happen... I can't really think of it myself. Except for previous one that can be considered good.



Author's Response:

All I can say is that Celia will get what's coming to her at the end, she's been a pretty evil antagonist so far so she's earned some karmic retribution.

Reviewer: Omanahan88 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 18 2023 9:08 PM Title: Orbital Annihilation

Love this! Short, sweet, but packed with plenty of good stuff. Terrific work once again!!



Author's Response:

Thanks, I wanted to try something a little different, I don't usually just go wild with destruction stories but I felt like it could be fun.

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 18 2023 7:19 PM Title: Orbital Annihilation

Yeah, even aliens survived. In Neet of the dead, how do you plan to remove antagonist without killing? Usually in shrink stories there's always an obvious solution but that one is racial so I don't think you can just shrink her down. Will she work as a something akin to prostitute (or servant) for tinies to relax after a day of work? It has potential to work since she'll still be 'a goddess ' , just in a different way. Is there any other way to redeem her?



Author's Response:

I've killed plenty of antagonists over the course of my stories, I just wanted this one to be fairly lighthearted and goofy. I don't want to spoil what's going to happen with Celia but no she doesn't have a happy ending coming lol.

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