[Report This]Date: June 16 2023 3:17 AM Title: Cat and Mouse
Oooowwwwww!!! Such a great story! I loved the plot, the way you
developed the situations between Harrison and Katie... but at the same
time I am feeling just ruined lol! It's because I was drafting the same
thing, for real!! Despite my story having obviously different details
and a
different world building (the cat-girl and mouse-boy where college
friends
instead of office rivals, he didn't bully her, as they had fun together
with
her new characteristics... and two available endings, to write
some), most of the plot was SO similar that I am honestly discouraged
to finish it, so to the recycle bin it goes :( . Really, even the name
of the girl was the same: Katie, for the same reason: a pun with the
nickname Kitty which she had on her after the transformation... (the
story was even to be called 'Katie became a Kitty!')
No, it's not
your
fault, nor mine's, it happens lol, This is the second time we sort of
have the same idea, but this time I didn't write it before lol. And your
story is just great, really, I am not envy of having you writing it, I
am actually very happy (despite feeling a bit sad for not being able to
use
my idea now...), as your story stands among many stories that use a
similar plot. I loved the interaction between the two and was
surprised to see that she recovered him in time and is even going to
group meetings to see him as a friend and not food...
And,
browsing your list, I see that you have yet another new vore-centric
story... may I welcome you to the Vore side of the force? :D
10/10 of course!
Author's Response:
I say if you like the catgirl-mouseboy idea just go for it, it's a pretty easy vore setup and we could always use more stories around the concept. I mean the Munsters and the Addams Family aired at the same time right? Anyways thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: May 24 2023 7:10 PM Title: Cat and Mouse
You goddamn fucker! You're the goat of this site man. (Obv.) another banger. 10/10
Author's Response:
Thanks! This was a fun one, setting up a predator prey situation lol
Date: May 03 2023 2:18 AM Title: Cat and Mouse
Indeed, the buildup was excellent, to the point where I believed you were going to allow the digestion to take place. Of course, cats (and cat-girls) have a type of innate ability to regurgitate. Also, this story had a sweetness to it that I like (from time to time) and I can relate to Harrison's teasing of a girl he secretly had a crush on (and not really realizing how hurtful or bullying it seemed to her) - I think I've been guilty of that myself a time or two, only to be surprised when I found out later. Lastly, as you say, there's a very likely chance that Harrison takes a return trip to her belly - whether she lets him out might depend on her mood at the time - cats (and I assume cat-girls) can be pretty temperamental at times.
Author's Response:
Most of my stories are overly sweet, which I feel like even the most cold hearted cruel-giantess fan can appreciate now and then. Personally I like reversals of fortune, so a workplace bully finding himself as the mouse in front of a catgirl is appealing lol. Anyways Harrison wasn't as big of an asshole as he appeared at first, still he should probably be nicer to Katie in the future, as you said Catgirls are temperamental lol
[Report This]Date: May 02 2023 9:19 PM Title: Cat and Mouse
Excellent little (for you) story - I quite liked it, even the ending, which might surprise you. And, of course, your excellent writing skills were on display once again.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the kind words! I'm surprised you liked a vore based ending where the victim survives, but I guess a lot of it is the buildup lol. I wanted Harrison and the reader to be somewhat unsure of how serious she was up until the very end, I have a feeling Harrison might end up repeating that journey someday lol.
Date: April 30 2023 3:01 PM Title: Cat and Mouse
I always love your work especially when you veer towards the more vore-centric relationships. This one reminded me a lot of the Conquest dynamic.
Its a pity my internet cut out before i could finish the story, I would have loved to see how Kitty explained away her missing coworker.
Author's Response:
How tragic that your internet cut out at that exact moment, leaving poor Harrison as a delectable snack for the office's resident catgirl... well luckily she can probably claim discrimination if they ask where he went, right?
[Report This]Date: April 29 2023 6:13 PM Title: Cat and Mouse
Very nice!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: April 29 2023 5:42 PM Title: Cat and Mouse
That was pretty cute!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: April 29 2023 4:41 AM Title: Cat and Mouse
Very cute. I enjoy the cat/mouse art on the boards and I'm happy to see some type of gentle/vore story come out of it. I was kind of expecting an "o sht" moment with Harrison needing to run and getting chased before Kitty made good on all those vore threats, but he lost the second he had his guard down. I'm sure instincts are strong forces enough already, so it's no wonder alcohol was what made her easily give into her predatory role.
Harrison kind of had it coming when he'd been a douche to her while she transformed. I'm glad they reconciled afterwards. As minor as it is, conflict and characters being rude aren't easy for me to read through since I'm a certified cinnamon roll, but I'm glad I stuck through it. Gentle truly is patrician taste.
Also there's no need to be sorry about a delay on Neet because the speed of which you churn out stories is quicker than a catgirl's hand landing on a mouseboy's tail. I'm not really sure how you manage it at all. But your work is appreciated and you deserve to know that.
Author's Response:
Some of my stories have more conflict than others, as it is I try to aim for an uplifting story as a rule, like you I'm kind of a softy lol. Anyways the catgirl mouseboy thing was stuck in my head and I finally had to do a story on it, the whole "instinct" idea was fun and I like the long somewhat teasing relationship where Harrison is never quite sure how serious Katie's threats are. Glad my work is appreciated, I always love reading reviews!