Date: February 18 2024 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 16
The dynamic between Mike, Sarah, and Jake were the best part. The scene with Mike getting batted by Jake's member is primo stuff. It's the type of humiliation I love to see. Good stuff.
[Report This]Date: August 16 2023 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 16
Oh pls make the alternative story I bet it will be a good one too!!!!
[Report This]Date: July 09 2023 8:57 AM Title: Chapter 16
Honestly this is actually way much better than I expected but I do want to see the alternate side of the story so I say let the Writer be the writer :) (I can't wait to see this alternate story)
[Report This]Date: July 09 2023 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 16
absolutely sweet ending. compliments to both you and your friend for fantastic writing.
kinda curious what the alternative ending is though 😈
[Report This]Date: July 09 2023 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 16
Happy to see the story finished with a great kind ending. Been reading your stories for a long time and proud of you for finishing this story! :)
Date: July 09 2023 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 16
I think that it was a nice good ending to this story. I am curious what will happen in the bad end if he will become more of a toy or pet to the new family or something.
[Report This]Date: July 08 2023 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 16
I love alternate endings. Several cliffhangers you could go down and create more storylines for this one. Would love to see someone do different endings from other older stories.
Great story btw. Definitely hope you keep writing!
[Report This]Date: July 08 2023 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 16
I love alternate endings. Several cliffhangers you could go down and create more storylines for this one. Would love to see someone do different endings from other older stories.
Great story btw. Definitely hope you keep writing!