Date: July 26 2023 9:01 AM Title: Chapter 1
This story was super fun to read! Thank you so much for sharing. This was wonderful. <3
Author's Response: You are very welcome, Wholia! Thank you for reading! Your reviews make my day :)
Date: May 09 2023 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 1
Well you could add a 7th chapter describing his life in that garden
Author's Response:
I will probably leave the story as it is. I leave it you, the reader, to imagine what becomes of the Boss.
Hint: It isn't not good.
[Report This]Date: April 05 2023 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 1
Okay, I love the setup so far. I'm usually not into "mafia" type of stuff (which I get a vibe of from your story), but that's really interesting so far. Can't wait for the other chapters and what Andrea will turn out to be.
I love to predict the plot, so my guess is that she is the one, who tipped of the police about her boss and could now easily hand him over to the police for some reward, but she'll likely become drunk with power she holds over her former boss and decide to keep him this way, as it is worth much more than any kind of reward from the police. It's also likely, that she has a motive for tipping of the police, which could also impact her choice to leave him for herself to mess with instead of giving away to the cops.
That's my prediction, I wonder how much I got right. We'll see by the end of the story!
Author's Response:
This type of story isn't my cup of tea, either. I wanted to try my hand at something different. Hopefully I didn't mess up too bad!
Hmm... Interesting theory. I wonder how much of it is right? :)
[Report This]Date: April 04 2023 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 1
Pretty good story setup so far, though I suspect Andrea is not so innocent and in fact an evil mastermind all on her own.
It will be interesting to find out what happens next. Looking forward to the next five chapters.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.