Date: September 18 2023 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 5 what did you learn?
Juan seems to turn into the punisher when innocent people get hurt! there was some ominous bits in this chapter.. so was ten from the last chapter caged up with these 'pets?' she defiantly seemed to really want to eat the guys who where imps..
Author's Response:
Juan is crazy if i went into his character in depth but these where just poor kids harmless, ten is a monster who wants an excuse to eat you she sees them like a delicacy
[Report This]Date: July 16 2023 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 4 into the frying pan + (writes of passage short story)
that was tense those hunters are crazy, but i do like how it goes from brutal to completely tranquil to slight comedy.
Author's Response:
i try not to lean fully into the brutal side for an entire chapter because i don't want to cause any depression, i actually struggle with tranquil bits and comedy im known to be a funny person all my life so i think i'm just lucky there.
Author's Response:
i try not to lean fully into the brutal side for an entire chapter because i don't want to cause any depression, i actually struggle with tranquil bits and comedy im known to be a funny person all my life so i think i'm just lucky there.
[Report This]Date: June 26 2023 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 1
where did this story came from how do you think of all these scenarios it is wild! there are normal pressures and supernatural pressures then it all turns into one big explosive storm.
Author's Response:
i made it loosely based on the things that interest me but from a vore perspective i think it becomes more crazy in the end.
Date: April 04 2023 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 1
This was a very exciting story! I look forward to another chapter! Hope you have one planed!
Author's Response:
very glad you liked it yes I do actually the next part is much longer but I'm still working on certain bits of it.