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Reviewer: amerdism Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 29 2023 2:41 AM Title: A Fateful Encounter

Sry forgot to rate

Reviewer: amerdism Signed [Report This]
Date: April 29 2023 2:40 AM Title: A Beautiful Friendship

That was beyond dark, I really held out hope for Ashta and it was so heart wrenching seeing her go through that torment. Well, hope to see you continue the series, who knows, maybe our despicable duo will get their come uppance. Still, I get Ashta’ send was pretty clearly said, but I still hope she survived somehow and gets that much wanted revenge.

Reviewer: smoldegen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 04 2023 5:29 AM Title: A Fateful Encounter

So amazing!

The intro to Chapter 3 describing T.I.N.A.'s apocalyptic approach towards Ash's planet had me feeling some type of way. The power and chaos that came from the mere sounds of T.I.N.A.'s steps as she walked towards the planet, her scale relative to the planets, your descriptions of it all, they sent me.

I've been thinking about it all day!

Thank you so much for your work, truly a blessing to the size community.



Author's Response:

You flatter me haha. I'm glad you like it!

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 02 2023 10:06 PM Title: A Beautiful Friendship

Based on the plot, I should be 100% uninterested; I gave it a look, and I ended up reading the original AND the sequel in basically one gulp before I even thought to leave some feedback.


Pretty good :)



Author's Response:

Eyyy, I will take that. Thank you!

Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 01 2023 8:09 PM Title: A Beautiful Friendship

👌

Reviewer: Rise8 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 29 2023 10:56 PM Title: New Life. Old Problems

Love this story and happy to see a sequel. Would love to see poor ashta's world get crushed under tina's ass in just a thong.

Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 29 2023 10:24 PM Title: A Fateful Encounter

There several experiments that T.I.N.A could try, more then just terminating the planets. She could extract the inhabitants and put them into new environments, even leaving with them equipment and some infrastructure with them depending. Start her own petri dish worlds that are just for observation. Have some shoes to high heels that she makes the tines live on after termination, one that unworn, one worn by her, and one that Ashta wore. Or even better, have them develop for a while snd then gift the shoes to Ashta, who would be completely unaware, see how long and how things develop.There is also see how survival works in carpet or other common surfaces. 
Again, eagerly await for more!

Reviewer: Questathana Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 29 2023 8:04 PM Title: A Fateful Encounter

Love it!

Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 27 2023 11:17 PM Title: A Fateful Encounter

Can’t wait to see whats next!

Reviewer: Glaazius Signed [Report This]
Date: March 27 2023 9:07 PM Title: A Fateful Encounter

Really love this story.

And your writing is splendid!

Cant wait for the next chapters

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