Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: March 08 2023 3:24 AM Title: Pretty Handy

Nice story.  Very enjoyable to read.  There are a few grammatical errors here and there; but nothing that takes away from your story.

I especially liked how both Lafanpan and Raelza used Saitou for their personal pleasure, and how Lafanpan would often sleep between Raelza's breasts.

Well done.

Author's Response: Glad to hear you enjoyed my story despite its flaws!  Thank you for taking the time to leave a review :D

It was really fun to play up the playful friendship between Lafanpan and Raelza.  I was a bit concerned that having Lafa be so candid with Saitou might have come off as out of character, but I'm happy to hear it felt natural.