[Report This]Date: June 28 2023 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 11 - The Demonstration [Sofia, 12/18/2000]
Absolutely love how patient you are with your stories! It takes around 13 chapters for the main plot to unravel and for the main lewd part to develop. I'm sure it's not everyone's cup of tea, but I would not mind sifting through 19 chapters of world/character building if I knew that chapter 20 would reward my patience (just an example). Can't wait for it further!
Author's Response:
I'm glad that the pacing is not too slow for you and that you appreciate the character and world building. This is definitely the closest, most intimate look we've gotten at Katie and Alex and it certainly could not be rushed!
[Report This]Date: June 14 2023 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 11 - The Demonstration [Sofia, 12/18/2000]
(goddam logout after a timeout!!!)
"In exchange for his contributions to this study" <-- needs an opening quote
I hope you realize that one day you'll have to explain how they know that tinies are more durable - was it a consequence of their theories or did they find out somehow?
Personal favorites:
- Suzanne trying some scientific experiments of her own
- measuring him twice instead of just repeating "5/16 of an inch"
- "Sorry", as is tradition... will be tradition... you know what I mean!!!
Really waiting for the part where they're supposed to grow him back, and to see how things go between him and Alex (and Mrs Romero of course!)
Author's Response: Since Dante is the first living target to be size-reduced, the girls are probably making an educated guess that he is more durable based on observed durability increases in non-organic objects that were reduced or maybe its in the numbers. Or maybe there was some offscreen interactions that confirmed it! Thanks as always :)