Date: March 19 2023 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 7 - The Wardeness [12/18/2000]
oh my goodness.
I can't remember which story of yours it was from, but I remember the scene with Sofia at R&R with her tiny and I think I begged the universe that story be told. She's mature, thicc, and in that scene, obviously sexually obsessed with her tinier-than-usual-tiny. And she doesn't care about cleanliness. This is very fucking hot to me. And I love her attitude toward Dante in this chapter. The beginnings of things. Just wow. Looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response:
I'm glad she left such an impression!
[Report This]Date: March 12 2023 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 7 - The Wardeness [12/18/2000]
This is fantastically well-written and I really can't wait to see this story play out!
Date: March 11 2023 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 7 - The Wardeness [12/18/2000]
I'm liking Mrs Romero even more now! And I can't wait to see the part about them growing him back and IF they tell her he's not really a criminal :)
Btw, is there any difference between "harlot", "harlet" & "harlett"?
Date: March 06 2023 11:10 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Katie and Alex's Apartment [Dante, 12/16/2000]
Do you have a real life model of what Sofia looks like? I really wonder what her attitude towards Dante is gonna be
Date: March 06 2023 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 5 - A Change of Plans [Katie & Alex, 12/17/2000]
What a set-up, potential to be your best story, I'm wondering what kind of woman that Sofia is. Do you have an email address on which we can contact you for eventual commissions?
Hope the next chapter comes with Sofia action!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I recommend joining the discord server for answers to those questions and more.
The server is linked in most of the chapter end notes
[Report This]Date: March 02 2023 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 5 - A Change of Plans [Katie & Alex, 12/17/2000]
Wow... I used to think Sofia Romero was one of the investors until I reread her first appearance, and until a few minutes ago I predicted she would have to step in after they tried to grow him back...
I know you like the men in your stories to have about zero influence on anything, but it would have been hilarious if Dante had somehow said something to give Katie the idea.
Date: February 19 2023 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Second Times the Charm [Dante, 12/16/2000]
I'm realizing that the parts I've basically only read once happen to be those with Alex, I'll need to fix that... oh, and there's at least Mara Romero Borella as a RL example of an Italian Romero who took the surname from a Spanish parent.
Anyway, misc notes:
"lets measure"
"CHAPTER 3"
"could have went" (slang, ok, but I can see my English teacher giving me a baaad look if I don't point this out :)
right before "Katie picked up the sizer" there's an opening quote by itself, botched copy&paste?
"thoes" things
"He just existed in the background until Katie" - verb?
I'm still trying to come up with theories on who Sofia is and how he ends up with her...
Author's Response:
Thanks for pointing these out!
[Report This]Date: February 18 2023 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Katie and Alex's Apartment [Dante, 12/16/2000]
Poor guy, I almost wish he could get to spend more personal time with Alex. Hopefully he gets up close and personal with her thong now that he's the correct size ;)
Date: February 12 2023 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Katie and Alex's Apartment [Dante, 12/16/2000]
Just a quick question - the Italian lady isn't Sofia Romero, right? As an Italian myself I've always assumed "Romero" to be a Spanish surname (but in Italian "Romeo" doubles as a surname, I know someone who has to explain which is the name and which is the surname).
With that out of the way... YAY! Sofia Romero is here! (and I'm waiting to see how Dante ends up the way he does - one would expect him to be more useful for his studies than as a subject)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the insight on surnames. I'm not quite sure myself, but it was a request of the commissioner to make her Italian so perhaps she has an Italian father!
Dante's story might just be the most tragic of any R&R subject to date...time will tell.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the insight on surnames. I'm not quite sure myself, but it was a request of the commissioner to make her Italian so perhaps she has an Italian father!
Dante's story might just be the most tragic of any R&R subject to date...time will tell.