[Report This]Date: March 09 2023 3:04 AM Title: CHAPTER 9 (Finale): Regretful Realization
I’ll be honest, I never expected this to be the ending. I loved it plus it was a breath of fresh air.
Having the woman who kept messing up invention wise and had all the power through admin privilege.
Taking the role of Tinykin and not only risking herself but even being at the literal foot of Kyoto and Hellion while acknowledging how hard the two especially Hellion in particular had it since he was trapped especially given she was one of those problems.
Most female giantess don’t have chapters like this in other stories where they see through the perspective of the main character/victim.
Like I said this was a breath of fresh air and I thank you for it.
Author's Response:
I thank you heartily. Back when I was still pitching ideas in my head and with HellionPrime, there was another way this chapter could have gone.
In it Emily would have spoken to Hellion directly and told him about her plan to shrink herself without her usual Admin tricks, partially to show him that “it’s not that bad” or something ti that effect. Hellion promptly would have taken advantage of the situation to call and enter Kyoto, and then either tell her about Emily and have her deliberately be a little mean and “punish” her while pretending to he unaware or not tell her anything and deliberately leave her unaware of Emily, either way letting the Mech have control for the duration.
This would have been a more direct “Hellion gets revenge on Emily for the shit she put him through,” but it was decided that the route I took was better.