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Reviewer: Storyreader21 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 17 2023 6:01 PM Title: CHAPTER 4: Spherical Suffering

Nice. Looks like Kyoto and Hellion are going to be washed in the laundry. I hope Hellion ends up lost in the laundry and thus have to deal with his normal size and an unaware regular size human.  I wonder what would happen if McKenzie takes the bag with  Kyoto and Hellion outside of the game area with them inside. 



Author's Response:

That does sound interesting, but I sadly need to inform you that each chapter takes place weeks apart. Emily needs her development time after all to make her upgrades/updates for Hellion.

You do raise an interesting point about being taken out of the "play area," and I do not currently have an answer to that. 

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