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Reviewer: TinyGuyyyy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 08 2023 10:22 PM Title: Tuesday Afternoon

I'm loving the story! The aunt being a little perverse with the nephew is perfect hahah I hope he gets back under her feet soon



Author's Response:

Oh, trust me, that perversion is going to continue…and Tiny Tim hasn’t escaped Aunt Julia’s feet yet.

I will say, however, that as a fellow foot man, I’d overlooked the fact that not everyone else is into feet. Some people like some parts of the Giantess/Shrink trope, but not others. I realized that a lot of my chapters involved, or will involve, feet in some respect, so I wanted to create some chapters with little or no feet to provide a more well-rounded experience, like focusing more on vore and breasts in this latest chapter. That way everyone can find at least one chapter they can enjoy.

Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: Aac101 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 08 2023 6:37 PM Title: Sunday

Really liking this story, constantly checking back for new chapters. Hopefully see some more unaware interaction with mom too!



Author's Response:

So, my goal is to post one chapter a week, usually on Monday, but maybe Tuesday if I find things I want to change or adjust during my final proofreading. However, while I was initially trying to have the entire story finished before I even posted chapter 1, I ultimately decided that I didn’t want to wait, as I know my readers have been asking for more content. Unfortunately, this might mean some slight delays towards the end of the story, but I’m hoping to have everything written by the time it’s due for posting.

Your unaware mom comment, however, DID get me brainstorming about one of my later chapters, and I think it might actually be an improvement over what I had initially planned and will really add to the story, so thanks for that. 🤔😊

In all seriousness, check back every week, around Monday or Tuesday evenings, for the latest chapters.

Thanks for the review!


Reviewer: F-Paladin Signed [Report This]
Date: March 08 2023 5:04 PM Title: Tuesday Afternoon

Ah, exciting stuff, can't wait to see where this goes, new characters mean new opportunities. Are you planning on lasting as long as Babysitter Troubles?



Author's Response:

Well, I wasn’t planning on this story going for as long, or having as many chapters as Babysitter Trouble, but as it’s currently going, each day is going to be split up into at least two parts. In fact, Tuesday and Wednesday both ended up having so much content that I’ve actually split them into 3 chapters each. I guess, even when I’m trying to be concise, I end up writing too much. Lol!

Without spoiling anything, I will confirm that the characters I introduced will show up in a later chapter, but that’s all I’m willing to say at the moment.

In any case, thanks for reading, and for the quick review. 

Reviewer: bigfly20 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 01 2023 1:42 PM Title: Tuesday Morning

I like this chapter. I like how Aunt Julia is starting to become more aggressive with her sexual behaviors. She knows how to use her body even if the other person is tiny. I wonder if she will find some way to blackmail Tim to be quiet about what she is doing. Offers a deal to make things better but records it to make Tim look bad.

I hope that she does more stuff with breasts. Maybe something with the nipple.

Author's Response:


     First off, If I haven’t mentioned it before, I really like the trope of having a giant character being playful, overbearing, and/or aggressive towards a tiny individual, and I want Julia to become gradually more aggressive over time, but I also want this change to seem natural and not just jump to “cartoonishly evil”.

     Secondly, I did have a critique about why Tim doesn’t just come out and tell Natalie about his treatment, so I will be really trying to develop the threats and blackmail aspects of the story moving forward to justify his silence. Hopefully, I can create something that will at least be somewhat believable.

     While I hadn’t specifically considered nipple play in this story, I might be able to add something in.😉


In any case, thanks for reading; I appreciate the review!



Reviewer: blackairow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 21 2023 9:33 PM Title: Monday Afternoon

Loving the story so far, looking forward to the next chapter. Any chance that Natalie putting her feet up on the coffee table without a thought of Tim, gave Julia some ideas for future punishments or ways for her to change  Natalie’s comfort level? I’ll admit I was kinda hoping Natalie would smell the scent of the foot lotion coming from Tim and ask a few questions that Julia could use in her favour.



Author's Response:

Well, Julia will certainly be exploring a few other ways she can take advantage of having her tiny nephew literally at her feet, and the week is only just beginning. I’m certainly not going to give any specific details of what the rest of the week will bring, but rest assured, I’m planning on a little bit of everything, so there should at least be some chapters that everyone can enjoy.

The whole lotion scenario is one that I don’t think I’ve ever seen in any of the stories I’ve read, so there’s a lot of room to explore. I do kind of like the idea of Natalie noticing the smell of lotion on her tiny son, but you also have to remember the that that whole incident happened earlier in the day long before Natalie returned home. Thanks for the suggestion, though. I’m certainly going to consider that in my future works.

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: greenpeon Signed [Report This]
Date: February 15 2023 10:54 AM Title: Monday Morning

I understand it's a fetish story and common sense would only get in the way of the size shenanigans. But Tim and Natalie have me rolling my eyes at times.

Tim really needs to explain things to his mother more clearly. His situation would be resolved if he simply informed her that his aunt is intentionally threatening and abusing him. Natalie also wins parent of the year for being so instantly dismissive of her son's constant pleas. At the very least you'd think she'd verify the situation by setting up some secret nanny cams to check how her incredibly squishable son is being "looked after" while she's not around.

Anyway I assume his aunt is going to condition tiny Tim into an obedient and submissive slave before tricking or convincing his mother to get in on the action... perhaps over a few bottles of wine while she's tipsy and uninhibited. First by pressuring them into a few mother son foot rubs after a hard day in the lab. Or suggesting she keep Tim securely trapped in her stocking/panties/bra etc, instead of leaving him alone and unsupervised at night, or potentially wandering off and getting lost during the day. Before long his mother might start to question if she really wants to lose her obedient little toy, why keep working her ass off at the lab to find a cure?



Author's Response:

I understand your frustration concerning the plot, but this story is more focused on scenarios and shrunken interactions rather than plot or character development.

In the future, however, I really want to focus on fleshing out more realistic characters, but I also like the dynamic of one giantess being playful and threatening the shrunken character to ensure secrecy. I do appreciate you pointing it out, though, and I’ll try to make my other projects more believable in this aspect.

As for the “behavioral adjustment” Julia is promising, I’m hoping to have this become an integral component of the plot moving forward, and I’m going to make sure everything flows well during my final proofreads before I post them.

Thanks for the critique, and for the review.

Reviewer: dudeduderson2000 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 14 2023 8:30 PM Title: Monday Morning

Excellent story so far, can't wait to see the next chapter!



Author's Response: Thanks for reading. If you have any suggestions, let me know.

Reviewer: teradonk Signed [Report This]
Date: February 13 2023 11:10 PM Title: Sunday

I like your stories and this scenario is so hot, a tiny tortured by a mature woman.
One thing: consider seriously trimming down the CAPITAL words for used for EMPHASIS in dialogue. I mean, you use them a lot, to the point of obnoxiousness. this is a porn story, so I don't give a shit about style and skill usually, but this makes it weird to read. if you don't agree, try reading a portion of your story out loud and you'll hear how unnatural all the emphasis sounds. it's not necessary and it's intrusive.
anyway, good story though!

Author's Response:

Yeah, I probably need to reserve that for when someone is shouting or screaming. I think I just want to confer emphasis, and I’m not exactly sure how to do that effectively. Maybe italics? In any case, I do try to read the words aloud in my mind when I’m proof reading, or even speak them aloud when I do my dictation.

Anyway, thanks for reading, and for the critique. I’ll certainly consider it going forward.

Reviewer: brett533 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 13 2023 7:26 PM Title: Monday Morning

Interesting not a foot guy

Author's Response:

Well, I can guarantee not all the chapters will be foot focused, although most of them probably have a little foot stuff. I’d say, you might wait until about Tuesday through Thursday chapters, as they have other types of interactions other than feet.

But, maybe I do focus on feet a lot, even when I don’t intend to, and that might not be everyone’s cup of tea. I’ll certainly try to vary my interactions better going forward.

Reviewer: bigfly20 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 07 2023 3:39 AM Title: Sunday

This story looks to be amazing. The aunt that wants to tease and use her body with a tiny person but also know it is her nephew. She wants to fulfill her fantasies while watching him with care at the same time. Also knowing that her sister will come back later. What can she get away with without Tim telling on her. Or will Tim start to like this sort of attention his aunt is giving him. I hope she gives him all the experience that mature woman would know how to feel good.

Author's Response:

Well, Julia certainly has some plans in mind for having fun with her tiny nephew, and she’ll discover a few more as the week goes on.

Tim, however, is certainly not fond of his treatment, and is going to do whatever he can to stop it, even tattling to his mother. Of course, Julia will have to find a way to keep her little nephew quiet, even if that means taking drastic measures.

Reviewer: Jay1236527 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 06 2023 11:34 PM Title: Sunday

Amazing start to the story! Love this character style you have implenented and i am always a fan of unaware stuck to feet. Looking forward to more



Author's Response:

Trust me, I’m a fan of “unaware, stuck to feet”, too. This is the first story where I’ve really begun exploring the family dynamic with a playful, devious family member taking advantage of another family member. The aunt angle allows for a good dynamic of guardianship and a more mature person taking care of someone younger.

Thanks for reading, and for the review. Feel free to critique the remaining chapters as I post them.

Reviewer: TinyGuyyyy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 06 2023 9:36 PM Title: Sunday

I loved it! I loved that even though it was a chapter, it had a lot of content, I'm looking forward to the next sufferings of the little one with his aunt's feet haha




Author's Response: Well, my original plan was to have each day of the week be a single chapter, but while I do like chapters to have a lot of content, I don’t want them to be so long that it turns readers off. Most days will end up being split into about two chapters, but probably no more than that: I do have a lot to include, but I don’t want the days to just drag on and on.

Reviewer: Underfoottiny Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 06 2023 7:12 PM Title: Sunday

Love the devious aunt angle. Very good writing. Looking forward to more. 



Author's Response:

Yes, I wanted to explore the “playful yet devious” family member trope for a few upcoming stories, whether it be a sister, aunt, or cousin; or non-related family, like a sister/mother-in-law.

Feel free to add a critique of the writing style or shrunken encounters moving forward if you leave a review in the future.

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