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Reviewer: Perspec33 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 14 2023 11:15 AM Title: Friday Afternoon Pt.2

casserole.......... A++ writing 



Author's Response: Well, I had to find some excuse to get Mrs. Peterson and McKenzie into the story again. 😜

Reviewer: Asset of Ass Signed [Report This]
Date: July 13 2023 10:49 PM Title: Friday Afternoon Pt.2

Love that Tim found his way back into his aunt’s wonderful crack! Can’t wait to see what’s in store



Author's Response: Well, I, too, am certainly a fan to tinies getting stuck in between giant asscheeks. It’s a favorite trope of mine, especially where the giantess doesn’t know she accidentally sat on someone

Reviewer: bigfly20 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 13 2023 12:49 PM Title: Friday Afternoon Pt.2

It would be hard for Tim to escape without assistance. Aunt Julia would be more cautious as Tim nearly escaped, or be a little crueler. For him to escape, I have an idea but I don't normally like it when the story goes this way but it makes sense if Aunt Julia does. The idea is that Aunt Julia will fart with Tim in her ass cheeks. She will taunt him in saying that she needs to change her panties. She would take them off and wad them up over and over with Tim inside. She puts them in the clothes hamper as she is ready to do laundry again. She gets a phone call from Natalie and is distracted. McKenzie has been watching and uses this time to sneak in and grab Tim. Maybe switch him out with a real bug so that Aunt Julia thinks the movement in her panties in the hamper is Tim

Author's Response:

     Yeah, I agree that it would be hard for Tim to escape without assistance, and just having him simply escape his cage on his own again would be repetitive an unoriginal. The main reason for this this upcoming chapter was to work in some fan suggestions, but I fear that I may have written myself into a corner…

     …That is, until your suggestion. Now, it’s definitely not going to go the way you outlined above, but it’s given me the inspiration I need to make everything work. Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Inari The Floof Signed [Report This]
Date: July 13 2023 5:50 AM Title: Sunday

I love your stories and I hope Tim gets a happy ending as well as Aunt Julia getting what she deserves. Maybe through Kenzie?



Author's Response: Well, I certainly appreciate your kind words and input. Thank you.

Reviewer: F-Paladin Signed [Report This]
Date: July 10 2023 3:37 PM Title: Sunday

Maybe a way Tim could get out of his 'cage' is to make it look like he has escaped and when the giantess comes to find him he clings to her to get out



Author's Response:

Yeah, that’s kinda what I was thinking; the issue is exactly how to do it. In that case, it probably should be Julia again, but that might get a little repetitive. I was also thinking Tim makes it appear that he’s still in his cage, like sleeping under a blanket, then escapes in the same fashion as you described, in that case it could be either Julia or Natalie.

Anyway, thanks for the suggestion.

Reviewer: F-Paladin Signed [Report This]
Date: June 29 2023 9:24 AM Title: Sunday

Man what a cliffhanger, can't wait to see what happens next!



Author's Response: Well, I didn’t realize how long the morning chapter was becoming until I was almost finished, so I decided to split it. I’ve been working tirelessly on the next chapter because I really want to get the situation and scenarios correct, which required a lot of planning, blocking, and acting out the characters’ movements. I certainly hope everyone appreciates the effort, and I’m hoping the next chapter is finished by the end of the coming weekend.

Reviewer: thegreatrizzo Signed [Report This]
Date: June 01 2023 3:26 AM Title: Friday Morning Pt.2

My vote is Mckenzie. Throw some teen romance in the mix

Author's Response: Well, you have to remember that McKenzie is still 4 years older than Tim (she’s 19 and he’s 15) so the likelihood of any kind of teenage romance between them (even if she does find him in his shrunken state) is pretty slim. However, I do like the idea of a teenage romance budding over the circumstances…🤔

Reviewer: bigfly20 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31 2023 3:54 AM Title: Friday Morning Pt.2

I would have to say that McKenzie is the best option to find Tim. If Sandra found Tim, she would most likely return him right away to Aunt Julia. Viewing the adult as the responsible one and not a shrunken teenager. McKenzie would be the sort of person Tim would want to find him. McKenzie would listen to Tim and would consider Tim's plight from the get go. She would believe that Aunt Julia is torturing him. Tim is young like her so she would feel incline to help him. But since she is a teenager, she views herself just as capable as an adult for any adult thing. Upon hearing the stories Tim tells hers, she could want to do the same thing as Aunt Julia did. Maybe asking him to walk over her body from boobs, butt, and pussy to please her. She might not be as rough as Aunt Julia but gets the image across that at his shrunken state that people might view him as a sexual toy. He decides to come back to his house after that. Aunt Julia finds him and Tim tells her what happen. Aunt Julia is fine with it as it is a weapon in her arsenal to use against Tim. With Aunt Julia making it sound like he visit the neighbor girl to bang, all of Tim's complaints against Aunt Julia don't sound rationale. It makes Aunt Julia sound good trying to help him and him just trying to have fun at Aunt Julia's expense. Thus, giving Aunt Julia a whole day to do whatever she wants with him and Natalie will not listen to his pleas. Even after the ordeal. I believe Mckenzie is the best choice for that. Or building a relationship between the two after the week is done.

Author's Response: I do like the idea of a relationship building between a Shrinkie and a giantess character; it’s something I’m definitely planning for my upcoming novel. Giving the main character some kind of outlet (gentle giantess) is something I am a fan of, even if they’re technically cheating on a significant other (I.e. My “With Great Power…” story). I also like my gentle giantess characters to be nice, yet playful, even if it gets the tiny person into trouble.

Reviewer: kickflipper Signed [Report This]
Date: May 31 2023 2:13 AM Title: Sunday

Huge fan of your stories so I’ve got to cast my vote. I think McKenzie would be entertaining, whether aware or unaware. Bring on the butt stuff!



Author's Response: Well, thanks for being a fan. Right now, I believe more people want to see McKenzie again, but I think, for the story to make sense, that both neighbor woman will have to be in the next chapter.

Reviewer: Applebottomj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31 2023 1:32 AM Title: Friday Morning Pt.2

I'm more interested in seeing McKenzie in the story. 


While we're talking about what we want to see. I'd love some more butt and either fart/sweat content. Could be from anyone and aware or unaware. Maybe trapped in the back of some panties/thong for chores or errands. 😀 



Author's Response: Yeah, I kinda figured as I was outlining the next chapter that people might want to see McKenzie. I think, in actuality, with the way I had envisioned the next chapter, that it’ll only work if BOTH neighbor woman show up.

Reviewer: LightSwipe Signed [Report This]
Date: May 31 2023 12:12 AM Title: Friday Morning Pt.2

I would love to see them both, but if i had to pick one more then the other I would say more mchenzie.



Author's Response: While I had initially envisioned Sandra as being the only neighbor seen in the next chapter, something told me that people would want to see McKenzie more. It shouldn’t affect the overall outcome of the next chapter, just changes how I write it.

Reviewer: F-Paladin Signed [Report This]
Date: May 30 2023 4:19 PM Title: Sunday

Now we get to the part of your stories I love the most, Unaware gals. I really hope Tim knows what he is doing, or he may regret it. Will the Aunt be the main focal point in the unaware parts, or will the other girls take center stage? 



Author's Response: Well, Julia will certainly be a portion of the unaware parts, especially in the next couple of chapters, but I’m also going to be adding at least one of the neighbor gals into the mix.

Reviewer: Huntertq Signed [Report This]
Date: May 29 2023 5:23 PM Title: Sunday

The one thing I really like is how you remind everybody in subtle ways, that Tim is not an innocent victim, he chose to sneak around in a place he should not have been and drank something that he should not have. His mom is feeling guilty but  her sister is maybe stating to show her if Tim stays small , he cannot be looked at or treated as a normal kid. He will be w little powerless person in a land of giants , and will be 100% depended on those giants but also a read needs to remember Tim did this to himself 



Author's Response: Well, I’m glad you picked up on the subtleties. In fact, I was wondering if I’d been TOO subtle in describing his behavior. I mean, I still want Tim to be a sympathetic character, but I also want there to be some repercussions and justification for Aunt Julia’s punishment regarding his behavior and the choices he makes. As you say, he did bring a lot of things onto himself: drinking the formula, being belligerent (albeit justified) towards Aunt Julia, escaping his cage despite knowing the consequences…

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26 2023 8:10 PM Title: Friday Morning

The description of Tim’s inner feelings on being inside the aquarium was very well writen. I really feelt the oppression and fear, it seemed authentic and thoughtfull. Now, let’s talk about some characters.

First Natalie. I will not say she is dense or dumb because she is presented as a streesfull person, who doesn’t try to soothe her son’s fears. This is not out of malice but, in my opinion, because of the surreal situation she is in and the fear of word getting out and loosing not only her job but also Tim guardianship. Also, her pushing Tim away and refuse to linten stems from an ever bigger fear of hurting her son.

There are two other problems that add to the precariousness of her situation. 1. the more time passes, more likely Tim is of staying the way he is or shrink even more. 2. as time passes more and more tangled Julia becomes in her power trip over Tim.

I said tangled because Julia would not go as far as killing her own nephew, that is just Tim's perspective playing up the situation, but she is in a surreal situation as much as her sister and is losing control of herself and her fantasies But my guess is she will get a reality shock after Tim manages to escape his prison house.

Now about the most important character introduced outside of the family we have Tim’s crush and neighbor: Mackenzie. She is short tempered and, like 9 out of 10 teenagers, has a deep need to be perceived as a capable adult. Those are very interesting traits actually as her encounter with Tim might loosen her a bit – I can totally see Tim convincing Mackenzie to play with him and I mean really play like chasing him while making noises and having real fun like a kid for the first time in a long time. Plus, Mackenzie seems to be very perceptive about details – she immediatelly identified the “bug” at her feet was no bug at all - so if Tim shrinks again she is the most likely to spot him.

Why some moody neighbour would do that for Tim? Well, maybe she is not willing at first, but Tim is the one most drowned in this surreal situation, abused by his aunt, pushed away by his mother and maybe forever trapped in a gigantic world, so he clearly could use some shenanigans to cheer up. And Mackenzie might really enjoy tiny Tim’s perspective of her, their meeting helping Mackenzie to really grow… as a person! As a person kkkkkkkk.

Been a long time since my last comment, but I am reading and I am liking. And I can’t wait for your other stories to come out too!

As always, thanks for writing and sharing with us. At this point I am just repeating myself but I love your feet scenarios! Peace and stay safe!



Author's Response:

Well, first off, let me say that I’m always happy to hear from one of my most avid readers and reviewers.

Right now, it might be too late to really address Natalie’s anxieties, but I think it’s something that I will allude to when we see her again, and really play up her…whoops, almost spoiled the ending for ya. 😉

As far as Julia, I know this story really seems to jump to Julia being the dominating giantess, but I wanted to keep the story somewhat short, and didn’t feel like I really had the time to truly evolve her into that role. It is a surreal situation, and it’s hard to say how a person would really react in that scenario. In my longer novels, I do want to take the time to evolve the playful and/or resentful giantess into the cruel, dominating type. I think this works best in the slow shrink genre, where the giantess changes and evolves as the main character gets smaller and smaller.

McKenzie wasn’t someone I had initially planned on including in the story, and her personality may not really fit the role of the playful giantess, but your ideas about how a playful character might react are certainly some food for thought. I’m thinking about including scenes in my upcoming novel, like a gentle giantess and tiny person taking a bath together, or maybe having a romantic interlude that truly feels natural and realistic.

Thanks for all the feedback and reviews!

Reviewer: bigfly20 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 26 2023 6:39 PM Title: Friday Morning

I like the idea of Tim being turned on a bit by the situations he is in with his Aunt. I hope he has a moment were he is turned on so much that he releases it on his Aunt. Hopefully when he is in her pussy or butt. She would notice to and tease him more for that. I like the battle he will have with thought of acting upon those feelings with his Aunt.

I know probably a lot of people have said a lot about Natalie's naivety about Tim's plight. I think it is find if there is an excuse for her naivety or continual naivety. What if she had a conversation with a coworker who saw her stressed at worked and super busy. This co-worker has a husband/wife that is a psychiatrist. Natalie is vague about the situation with Tim but the co-worker explains that Tim is not happy with the change and wants to find someone to blame. The blame has been falling on Aunt Julia. Natalie then views that Tim is projecting his anger and frustrations on Aunt Julia. Natalie would then feel bad for Aunt Julia and listen to her more. Just an idea

Author's Response:

Well, while I don’t like the idea of Tim being turned on by his aunt, I wanted to just briefly mention him being turned on by the hot girl next-door. It’s more of practice for my novel, where the tiny teenager starts realizing there might be some advantages to being small around a larger female he has a crush on.

I know Natalie’s naïveté is something that people have complained about, but it’s more of a plot device and wasn’t something I really wanted to take the time to develop, at least not in this story. However, your idea about having the mother character seek advice from a coworker is intriguing and something I’d certainly like to explore, maybe not for this story, but definitely for my next novel, so thank you for the suggestion.

Anyway, thanks for the review. I always look forward to hearing from you as you’re one of my more active reviewers.

Reviewer: Valanath Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 25 2023 4:18 PM Title: Friday Morning

I'm always excited to read this story when a new chapter is released, that's how good this is! If you are still thinking about having one of the neighbor women in the later chapters, I'm interested in seeing more of the daughter (Mackenzie).

Author's Response: Well, I’m glad you appreciate my work. 


I was thinking more people might want to see McKenzie again, but I still haven’t decided just yet. Like I said, it shouldn’t effect the overall plot of the story, just require a little more finagling with the details.

Reviewer: TinyBoxMew Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16 2023 1:28 AM Title: Thursday Evening

Wow, Natalie being that dense is crazy. Poor Tim, hopefully in time this will all come full circle and karma comes back around on to Jules.

Author's Response: Well, you aren’t the first person to point out Natalie’s being so dense and ignorant, but as I stated in the story notes, this story is more about practicing writing out my scenarios and shrunken encounters than overall character development. 

Reviewer: bigfly20 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 15 2023 9:28 PM Title: Thursday Evening

I have totally forgot about the dad. Aunt Julia will have to think of defense with him. Julia could get away with it if Natalie says there was no issue or shrinkage. But how long will that last without Natalie slipping up. Aunt Julia would have to worry about a third person going after her. Else she decides it is best to pack up and leave after this week.

Author's Response:

     Well, one of the things you’ll find in my stories is that there is a lack of giant male characters, primarily because I like to keep my shrunken encounters strictly between a tiny male and one or more giant female(s). The two boys in this story are the closest I’ve come to having giant male characters in my stories, although I have considered adding some giant couples encounters in other stories I’m outlining.

     For now, the father in this story is going to remain absent except for a few offhanded mentions. 

Reviewer: Aac101 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 09 2023 7:40 PM Title: Sunday

I feel like the neighbors are a side thought honestly. I'm still thinking there is a lot of room for interaction with Tim's mom and Julia. More unaware and possibly getting smaller to accommodate the unaware aspect. The new chapter was long but I think could have been maybe 2 chapters with more detail to Julia, then the neighbors. I really like this story though and wait diligently for Tuesday updates!

Author's Response:

I can guarantee there’ll more unaware interactions, especially on Friday, and I usually try to consider the size of my characters to make sure they fit specific interactions, but for this story, I really wasn’t planning on having Tim shrink any smaller. This story was more practice for my upcoming novel. Nonetheless, you are correct: There’s plenty of room for more unaware interactions with both Julia and Natalie.

Yes, I did consider breaking this chapter into 2, especially since the next chapter, Thursday Evening, is pretty short, but 🤷r05;a94;a039;.

lastly, your opinion about the neighbors is actually very insightful. I had pretty much figured that people would want to see one of the two neighbor women again, but if your thoughts are the consensus, I don’t have to worry about it so much.

Anyway, thanks for reading.

Reviewer: bigfly20 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 09 2023 3:35 PM Title: Thursday Afternoon

Since you are as your readers for advice for how it goes, how about Tim grows back but there is a condition to him staying big? Natalie finds a way for Tim to grow back but the potion is still active so it tries to continuously shrink him down. He needs to constantly drink the formula that Natalie creates on a semi-regular basis. The problem is that it is hard to synthesize. But it can be added to another living thing to produce it. Natalie would try a plant but that would take too long, and the plant could die. The easiest and quickest way is to implant it into her breast milk. Julia would be on board to have her breasts do the same for Tim. Julia would be part of the reason that Tim can return to normal. Tim can't say anything bad about Julia because Julia holds part of power to keep him normal. If he does, Julia would find a way to cut him off from the sources that keep him normal. He can live his normal life but he has a lease.

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