[Report This]Date: December 06 2023 1:13 AM Title: Sunday
You know I think it's funny that I get first review of the latest chapter. With that being said, I hope you didn't push yourself to hard when writing this, rest up when you need to. Also, amazing chapter once again, Tim keeps getting lucky by a hair and I can't wait to see how everything turns out and how his mom reacts to what he's been through, good luck on the rest of the chapters and your other stories. Like I always say I look forward to them because they are an amazing different take on the giantess vs tiny trope. Keep on keeping on! -Inari
Author's Response:
Oh, I usually don’t push myself too hard when I write, as I like things to come to me naturally; if an idea on how to proceed with the story isn’t ready or doesn’t come right away, I usually just wait until an idea comes to me and I can outline it before continuing. The events of the Friday evening chapters required a little bit of thought about how to get Tim where I wanted him, but I’m overall happy with how I outlined the events and laid everything out.
I always love the first few days after posting a chapter waiting for the reviews to come in, and they’re always appreciated.
Thanks for the feedback, and, as always, thanks for reading!
Date: November 16 2023 8:54 PM Title: Sunday
This is such a great story I keep checking every week for an update 🥰 I even registered on here just to post how good this story is. Thank you for this amazing story
Author's Response: Well, thank you for the review. I encourage you to check out my other finished works as well as my upcoming projects.
[Report This]Date: October 17 2023 8:47 AM Title: Sunday
It is I, Inari The Floof once again! What an amazing twist you did there with Tim put into the trashcan instead of being eaten, but I figured you wouldn't do vore since it be a bit like a deus ex machina on how he survived since it never was said that he could possibly survive that type of harm before. Anyways, another good chapter and I'm looking forward to the rest of this story and the ones you create in the future! Keep on keeping on!
Author's Response: Well, I’m glad you like the twist; although, I was a bit worried that having Tim climbing out of the trash can might seem a bit repetitive after the hamper incident. I’m going to be working hard to finish the next chapter by the end of the month, but it might take a little bit longer…
Date: October 16 2023 11:40 PM Title: Friday Evening Pt.3
Nice chapter. A bit disappointed Tim was put in the trash instead of his mom's mouth. I love unaware full tour vore with tiny survival. Still I really hope Julia doesn't find him and he gets more trash dumped on him covering him from sight.
Author's Response: Well, I haven’t really written a tiny survival story like that, as I try to keep some degree of “realism” in my stories. But, while I do like your idea about a tiny being stuck in the trash for hours—or even days—at a time, having more and more trash dumped on top of him, Tim needs to get out of the trash bin at some point. 😉
Date: October 16 2023 5:57 PM Title: Friday Evening Pt.3
Another great chapter, thought i will not lie I was hope for some unaware mouth action involving Tim and Casserole
Author's Response: I know, but I couldn’t find a better way to do the unaware vore without Tim’s mother either discovering him, or swallowing him.
Date: September 17 2023 6:16 PM Title: Friday Evening Pt.2
Nice. I really hope the mom has to go somewhere and puts on her socks and shoes with tim inside before leaving the house.
Author's Response: Well, sorry to disappoint, but she’s in for the evening and planning to relax (if I didn’t make that clear). But, that doesn’t mean other antics can’t ensue at home. 😉
Author's Response: Well, sorry to disappoint, but she’s in for the evening and planning to relax (if I didn’t make that clear). But, that doesn’t mean other antics can’t ensue at home. 😉
Date: September 16 2023 7:09 AM Title: Friday Evening Pt.2
Once again, another amazing chapter from you. I can't wait to see how this story ends and for stories in the future. I've been here reading your stories since before I had an account. From the beginning of Babysitter Troubles to now. I love how far you've come and how much you put into your stories. Thank you so much! Keep up the hard work and I'll keep on reading
Author's Response:
Date: September 16 2023 1:20 AM Title: Friday Evening Pt.2
“How would YOU like it if YOU were the one who was small, and I kept poking fun at YOUR predicament?!” Oh how funny it would be if this actually happened.
Author's Response: Well, karma can be a bitch!
Date: August 15 2023 3:15 AM Title: Sunday
I'm also ready for the next adventure. This has been a good one. Final requests? Unaware mom and maybe some bathroom stuff.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I’ve had a few requests for some unaware situations with Natalie, so I’m working on fitting those in.
I’ll have to give some more thought on bathroom and toilet stuff.
[Report This]Date: August 11 2023 8:07 PM Title: Friday Evening
I think it would be possible for a more fanservice evening if Natalie feels the pressure of stating that it would be tomorrow for Tim to grow big, that she would leave the house to go back to the office for an overnighter to make sure that it will work. She will feel horrible if it doesn't work, causing more overworking. It will cause her to fall asleep there and wake up late, allowing more personal time with Aunt Julia.
If Aunt Julia has the house alone with Tim, I think that Aunt Julia should have Tim go to bed in her pussy. imagine him spending a whole night inside her. She gets pleasure all throughout the night of him struggling until he has to fall asleep. She can also tease him that he should feel lucky that he did. Nobody has water mattresses these days and she was able to provide that luxury to him.
the other idea is for him to make love to her nipple. Have her promise that she will be nicer if she gave her some affection for all the kind treatment she does for him. All of this is a ploy to record him doing naughty things to her. Blackmail him to agree to whatever story Natalie and Aunt Julia make about the previous week to hide that he shrunk. Keep him in line if he ever spoke up, she could turn it around against him.
[Report This]Date: August 11 2023 2:29 PM Title: Friday Evening
Would love to see Julia perused Nat into having him pamper her. Love to see him reluctantly give his mother a foot massage for helping create an antidote.
Author's Response:
This is definitely something I’ve considered; you’ll have to wait to find out. 😉
BTW, any thoughts on continuing your “Origins of a Foot Fetish” collaboration story?
[Report This]Date: July 20 2023 3:23 PM Title: Natalie’s Work Week
As I comment I have a wide smile on my face. It seems even when only practicing people (me included) like your writing. That said, I am not sad Tim’s story is coming to a close since – like ‘Inari The Floof’ already commented - we know it was only practice for the lots of great works yet to come.
What I mean is I can’t wait for the release of Little Big Brother and Summer with my Stepsister – but you probably already knew that.
About the dialogue in this chapter, it went smooth as a show, don’t tell. What do I mean: altough I would agree with Julia, Natalie acts as a worrywart and doesn’t want to leave anything to chance, displaying the contrast between the two: Natalie is careful and also more anxious, while Julia is more extrovert and carefree/careless.
So, I am sorry for the people that wanted Jules to be an evil maniacal dominatrix. She isn’t (at least as far as I can tell). I must hold the urge of
making more theories – ‘bigfly20’ idea of Mackenzie not giving up is spot on.
Must… hold… the urge!! Anyway, there is a more important thing than my theories: you taking the time to practice, asking for the readers opinions and even responding to all the comments shows how much care and work you put
into this for us.
Thank you. A million times thank you! Hope everything is well. Stay safe!
Author's Response:
Yes, “Little, Big Brother” is going to be the next, big project for me, but there’s 2, maybe 3, small things I’d like to finish before really diving into writing that novel, specifically a short story about a tiny being stuck between his wife’s toes while she gives herself a foot massage, a scenario I’m planning to include in the upcoming novel, and finishing the alternate giantess chapter of “Babysitter Trouble”. There might be a quick story about a teenager getting shrunk while his younger sister hosts a pool party, but I don’t know how long that might turn out to be, and I really don’t want to jump into another multi-chapter project unless I have a clear outline and can confirm it’ll only be a few chapters long, if necessary.
I’ll be honest, chapters that are dialogue driven and have long conversations are something that I really have to take a long time writing and finalizing, because I have to make sure I hit the plot points I want to cover, while still making the dialogue feel smooth and natural. Often times, I find myself physically playing out the conversation out loud to make sure it sounds realistic.
So, as far as Julia’s personality, I wanted her to be playful and domineering, and not just jump to downright maliciously evil. I do like a domineering, even resentful giantess, but one who reaches that point naturally over the course of being around a tiny person for a while, and discovering just how much fun she can have tormenting the tiny in various ways.
In conclusion, I am really liking my idea for the “Scenario Series” to practice some of my scenarios, encounters, and interactions for writing practice. I really think this is going to vastly improve the quality of my novels going forward.
Thank you for your high praise and support!
[Report This]Date: July 20 2023 12:22 PM Title: Sunday
I am so honored
A+++ writing
*bows*
Se la vie, flowers wither and bloom let your mind wonder like the dust upon your grey storming field. A revisit is often beneficial and full of nostalgia and a chance for a new perspective
Author's Response: Well, I usually try to at least consider suggestions from my readers. Plus, the ending I’m planning will most certainly leave it open for a sequel if I so choose; in fact, I’ve even been kicking around the idea of adding a short epilogue which will facilitate the possibility of a sequel, but I haven’t decided whether or not to add it just yet.
[Report This]Date: July 20 2023 2:23 AM Title: Natalie’s Work Week
Hi me again, I am sad this story is coming to a close. However I know you have great works to come and your writing style is fantastic. I also love how you have the protagonist never give up and not break and get something akin to Stockholm Syndrome because of their torture and them getting a happy ending when they didn't deserve the torture in the first placeyour stories as it's something you don't see to often on this site with a flow like that as if stories like that exist they aren't finsihed. It's refreshing. Anyway I look forward to all your works no matter the ending because once again above all else you are an amazing writer! Stay foxy my friend!!
Author's Response:
Well, I do usually like to have some kind of a happy ending in my stories, but that may not always be the case going forward. Unfortunately, my previous attempts at having “sad” or an “open-ended” conclusion to my stories were not well-received, but that was probably more to do with the ultimate execution in my writing as opposed to people not liking unhappy endings. Moving forward, I just need to make sure that if I plan to write a “bad ending” to a story, it needs to fit the story and plot narratives, and, at least, have it make sense or leave things open to continuations if I so choose.
As far as the whole “Stockholm Syndrome” narrative, it wouldn’t really play out as a tiny liking his torture or being tormented. It would probably develop more like a tiny person developing a crush on a gentle giantess, and developing a “fetish” for their features (e.g. developing a foot fetish after seeing a giantess’s sole from a new angle, and then wanting to be rolled around under her feet or cradled in between her soles).
Anyway, thanks for reading and sharing your insights.
[Report This]Date: July 20 2023 1:25 AM Title: Natalie’s Work Week
Sad to be seeing this story ending so soon, but I understand wanting to stick with the week long structure.
First thing that crossed my mind for Tim ending up in the casserole would be for him to climb onto someone’s plate as he attempts to get some food, only for the owner of the plate to not notice him on it (maybe due to other food items on the plate already) to then lift the plate over the casserole as they are adding food to their plate.
One thing I had hoped to see at some point during this story was some more unaware interactions between Nat and Tim. Most of all some unaware in shoe interactions where Julie had put Tim or trapped Tim in his mother’s footwear. Possibly having Julie reverse blackmailing Tim with lies about Tim constantly going near Julie’s feet due to some bizarre fantasies of his. That Julie hadn’t told Nat about because she didn’t want Nat to worry. Julie puts him in his mother’s shoes both for his torture and to give credence to her lie about Tim trying to indulge himself.
Whatever you decide to do to finish out this story, I definitely will be looking forward to it. I’ll also be on the lookout for your future stories.
Author's Response:
Yeah, the week-long structure provided a few key aspects to the story while also ensuring it stayed relatively concise.
Tim clinging to a plate was also one of the few ideas I’ve been kicking around. I’m just not exactly sure how to properly implement it yet.
I actually hadn’t considered Julia manipulating the situation by telling Natalie that Tim had acquired a foot fetish while shrunk. It’s certainly a scenario worth exploring, if not for this story, for future ones. Having a shrunken person exploring a newfound fantasy as they get smaller, however, would be a more natural, realistic way of getting that tiny into trouble.
But fear not, while the story is coming to a close, there’s still plenty of fun planned. Friday evening is going to be a two-parter, and I’ve been kicking around lots of ideas as to what kind of trouble Tim can get himself into. I’ve already got the first few details figured out—just need to get them written.
[Report This]Date: July 19 2023 8:50 PM Title: Natalie’s Work Week
Please don't let this story end. It is wonderful. I would like to see Natalie come back with the antedote, but it works much slower on humans and requires multiple doses. The amount she brings home only grows him back a couple of inches and unfortunately Natalie gets called away on business and asks Julia to take Tim to her house until she gets back in another week.
Author's Response:
Lol! I know that a lot of people have gotten really attached to this story, but it’s got to end at some point. I can’t keep it going forever; I have other stories I want to get to. Besides I really don’t like it when stories just go on and on with no sign of ending, and this site is way to full of stories that had promising starts, but the author(s) just abandoned writing and never finished.
But, given your suggestion, I think you like how the story wraps up…plus, there’s always the possibility of a sequel if enough readers really want one.
[Report This]Date: July 19 2023 3:58 PM Title: Natalie’s Work Week
Aunt Julia really does have to make this afternoon enjoyable. She isn't going to have this chance again. (unless she steals some of the shrinking chemical.) I think that she should put him inside her vagina again. She knows how amazing it feels so she would want to do it again. Maybe keep him in there for a little bit while she does other things. Maybe Mckenzie comes by for Tim but can't find him because he is in Aunt Julia's pussy. He struggles inside giving Aunt Julia pleasure as Mckenzie searches. Mckenzie won't be able to search there on Aunt Julia. If not that way, I still think that the pussy is good. Maybe the nipple before, Aunt Julia forces Tim to cum into her nipple before putting him in her pussy. Just some idea rambling. I just think she needs to satisfy some sexual craving before Tim returns to normal
Author's Response:
Well, your scenario is certainly intriguing. Not sure it’s exactly what I want to add to this story for the end, but certainly a scenario that I will integrate into a future story, so thanks for the suggestion.
I think the rest of the afternoon is going to be eluded to in an afterthought, but I can certainly see Julia using Tim for one last “self-gratification” session. 😉
[Report This]Date: July 19 2023 1:44 PM Title: Natalie’s Work Week
I hope just as Natalie is about to leave, the rabbits shrink back down, meaning the antidote doesn’t work.
Author's Response:
I can certainly say that this was something I had considered, and I absolutely think it’s a good idea, but I think I’m going to go in a slightly different direction for this story.
However, as I really like this particular idea, I’m most definitely going to use it in a future story once I find the right one!
[Report This]Date: July 16 2023 12:24 PM Title: Sunday
The only way I can see Tim giving up on blabbing to his mom is for her to almost kill/embarrass him, so he would feel bad about her finding out and possibly her feeling guilty since she's already under so much pressure etc.... casserole is one option for his aunt to try ( perhaps after some time in the oven, he winds up on his moms plate or maybe just ends up as leftovers or in the garbage ) , but their are other ways his mom could almost kill him, I know u enjoy options that are unique/new to gtsworldiverse. But since u asked here are some starting prompts
Ass- panties, cushion, plug, chair, towel, TP
Feet- shoes, heels, sandals, paint, ring, anklet, massager, pedegg
Vore- casserole, ice cream, liquid chocolate, coffee, gum, candy, marshmallow, boiling, ice
Breasts- cup, necklace, running
I enjoy your stories for their great ideas, here are some basic ones XD
Author's Response: Well, as of right now, I’m not exactly sure how I can get Tim into the casserole without anyone knowing and still have the chapter end how I want; unless I find some inspiration, I may have to abandon that particular aspect, but I still have some time to figure things out.
[Report This]Date: July 14 2023 9:41 PM Title: Friday Afternoon Pt.2
I'm talking about the warm casserole in the oven for the next chapter, mouthplay/unaware/aware/ treated like food/left overs/fridge/garbage its up to you i know youll find a creative solution...... its been a min since pudding, the casserole is such a big part of him getting caught.
A++ writing
Author's Response:
Well, I haven’t quite figured out how that’s all going to play out just yet. The real issue is figuring out how to get Tim into the casserole 🥘 in the first place…you know, without someone intentionally putting him there…
Any ideas?