Reviewer: King Supercar Signed [Report This]
Date: February 02 2024 6:01 AM Title: Saturday

Nooooo. Not a bad ending, those are the saddest endings. He was so close too. Please tell me there'll be a happier sequel for Tiny Tim. I hate when the protagonist has to suffer instead of live his days in peace. Please tell me the sequel will have a happier ending, or at least the mother making it so that it's not that bad. Or, even a non canon alternate ending where he grows back and his aunt gets punished. I feel like a happier alternative ending will sooth the fans who really liked Tim and wanted to see him win for once after all the suffering. Also sorry if I'm being too demanding, I just really feel bad for innocent Tim

Author's Response:

Well, I’ve certainly gotten mixed reviews with regards to the ending. Maybe people will feel better once the epilogue is posted. I think I will also go back and do some rewrites of this story to help the ending fit a little better.

With a sequel in mind, I probably would write a more cathartic, happy ending if and when I go through with it. It would also probably focus on Tim having to deal with the giant world outside his house.

Overall, I just need to take it all in stride and work on improving my plot development. I just don’t want to be pegged as a writer who always writes happy endings. 

Reviewer: LordVenom189 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 01 2024 12:16 AM Title: Saturday

I'm just gonna say this, I was entirely expecting this whole thing to go wrong incredibly fast, but I never knew it would get this interesting. This is just making me guess how much further Tim is going to end up enduring. makes me wonder how Tim hasn't got any friends wondering what the hell happened to him...But just in the case of it, that would be interesting to see

Author's Response: Well, I kinda hinted how Tim was kind of an introvert who didn’t have many friends outside of school, so unless he physically made an effort to reach out and meet up with his schoolmates, there was no one who realized he was missing…unless, of course, they live next door…

Reviewer: Teen Wonderer Signed [Report This]
Date: January 28 2024 1:25 AM Title: Saturday

Hey, I loved the story. But can you please make a happier alternative ending. I was rooting for Tim this whole time. And seeing him so close to his happy ending but losing it just makes me feel sad. I know it might take awhile, but could you please try, many of us wanted Tim to get a happier ending while seeing his aunt get punished. Or at least an ending where his neighbor he has a crush on finds him and takes care of him. You don't have to, but I just left this story feeling sad for the protagonist. And angry at the mother.

Author's Response:

So, there’s a couple of things that I’ve decided since this story ended:

1) I will be adding an epilogue that will set up a potential sequel down the road. I think that will satisfy some of your and other’s requests and concerns for a better, more satisfying ending; and

2) I plan on revisiting this story in the future and making some edits throughout starting from chapter 1 that will help this ending fit better.

I’m obviously still having trouble being able to write a non-happy ending for a story that feels like it fits. While my readers and I do seem to enjoy the catharsis of a happy ending, I also know that there are some stories that I want to write that I just don’t think fit with a happy ending. Obviously, I want endings to fit, and I want to be able to write both good and bad endings; this is just something I’m going to have to work on as a writer.

Perhaps the epilogue will help satisfy everyone in the meantime once I get it writing.

For now, I’m glad you liked the story overall, and I appreciate you taking the time to post a review and provide some honest feedback.

Reviewer: SizePrincess Signed [Report This]
Date: January 26 2024 4:14 AM Title: Friday Evening Pt.5

Leaving this review in lieu of being able to DM, and I don't think Shrinker82 is on the discord?

In response to the other replies.

To Red536, good to know your review wasn't deleted. 

And to Shrinker82, sorry for jumping to the accusation that you had (I have seen on this site and others, reviews that were purposefully deleted from content for being critical, but still sorry for jumping to that conclusion so abruptly)

I want to make it clear, I don't 'dislike' or hate bad ends, or ones where the main character isn't given a happy ending. 

I just think the story should follow some semblance of continuity, especially with characterization, size-erotica or not, I think if a person is presented one way (and shows no signs of changing from that characterization in any major way) they should be held to that same characterization.

I mean unless there's a shock/twist reveal (like this loving/kind character is secretly a serial killer, but keeps it under wraps, etc)

I just felt that Natalie wasn't shown to be someone who would be A) on board with her son's treatment at her sisters hands, or B) continue it/agree with her after learning the truth, as Shrinker82 had not written her in any way showing herself being open to such things.

Now if you *had* peppered in moments, as you said, of Natalie getting stressed out and anxiety ridden, and all the hard work she's putting into things, and the added personal pressure of it being her son on the line here, and maybe a few moments of her imagining him tiny at their feet rubbing them with Jules, etc. Or writing in Jules over time working on Natalie, hitting her weak points and slowly making her more and more ok with treating Tim like that.

I feel it would have made the final pay off here more palatable. (again some people may disagree and just say "oh this is just size erotica, don't take it so seriously.")

But the quality you presented here I feel is important, you wrote the content well, and I feel that a certain standard was set due to that good quality writing, that the characterization should also be upheld in the same regard. (Sorry if my earlier review may have come off as overly negative, I just feel after all that reading, the payoff wasn't handled well) 

And if this is the ending you always had planned, go with it, by all means. It's just I think this ending could have been set up more, or laying the groundwork for it more so on Natalie's end as said above, and thus her agreeing to keep him small and subservient, would have been more in fitting. 

I am interested in where a epilogue would take the characters, as well as were a potential sequel could be handled. 

Reviewer: SizePrincess Signed [Report This]
Date: January 25 2024 3:03 AM Title: Saturday

So, you're what? Deleting reviews that are critical of the ending instead of leaving them up for others to see. (as I saw a critical review the other day which has now strangely, magically dissapeared, hm, wonder how that happened?) 

I for one agree with the (now deleted, if anyone else sees this be warned your reviews may not last) review about the ending being a letdown. (but this was similar for 'with great power')

you set up Natalie as a caring, albeit somewhat distracted with her work, parent. 

And throughout the story have Jules going through great lengths to keep the fact she's torturing her nephew (and sexually abusing him/raping him at one point) from her sister, and even here where she's worried about her sisters reaction as Natalie *seems* pissed off.

Only for Natalie to bend and shift around to Jules ideals......even when Tim is desperately telling her what has been happening, and Natalie has now seen/heard first hand some of the stuff she's done?

What would it take for Tim to be missing an arm for Natalie to say "Enough's enough, you're abusing my son for kicks." ?

The ending here was a let down for anyone who's read the story and were expecting a satisfying conclusion and some catharsis for Tim after suffering so much.

I know size based stories can often have bad endings, but the characterization has to fit, and here you just changed Natalie around at the last minute, purely to just screw with Tim.

Which fine, if you'd set Natalie up as someone who would be fine with her son being raped and tortured by her sister, fair enough. But that wasn't the case here, you forced her into the part of conspirator now with her sister purely to fuck with the character of Tim, when the narrative you yourself had established flies in the face of that. 

Author's Response:

     For starters, I would direct you to red356’s recently reposted review as to exactly what happened, as he’s a much more reliable source than I. I had actually already copied his reviews so I could write a more detailed response before he deleted them, but he kinda beat me to the punch.

     Secondly, I’m not the type of author who purposefully deletes reviews just because someone has something negative to say, all I ask is that they’re polite about it. The only times I delete review is because 1) It was duplicated (which occasionally happens), so I delete the duplicate; 2) There was blatant harassment (which I have never experienced on this site); 3) The chapter to which the review was tied was deleted (which I have only done a couple of times because certain chapters had formatting issues that I couldn’t fix by just copying and pasting over); or 4) The reviewer deletes their own review (which is what happened in this case)

     I always appreciate honest feedback — positive and negative — and I agree that all of your complaints are well warranted with regards to plot and character development, but if you recall, I stated from the get go and in the series’ descriptor that this story was going to be focusing primarily on the scenarios rather than plot and character development. Still, I would like those things to stand on their own.

     Believe it or not, this is the ending I had in mind the entire from the beginning, and I wasn’t even considering the possibility of a sequel. I think that by the end, story ended up taking a few turns even with an outline in place that I didn’t set it up well. While this wasn’t my first foray into the “domineering giantess” genre, it IS the first time I had a character go through a shift from sweet and caring to somewhat dominant. I gotta say that this chapter took a lot of writing, editing, and rewriting — I find dialogue driven chapters usually are — but honestly, I also felt during that time that this ending was going to be hard to justify. In the end, I had Natalie snapping from all the stress and Tim whining, but I know now that I definitely needed a better setup for even this character shift to be believable. Perhaps I should’ve made Tim misbehave and act out more, or hinted more at Natalie getting stressed and anxious from all the pressure…unlike with the issues you raised with my story “With Great Power…” forcing me to rethink the ending, I actually want to keep this ending in place and maybe make adjustments to the story later down the road to help it make sense. I think I will also move forward with an epilogue to help set up a potential sequel, but I want to work on other projects for a bit before I really work on that.

Ultimately, let me just say that I do appreciate your candor and letting me know of your complaints. I’ll try to make adjustments moving forward.

Reviewer: Aac101 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 24 2024 2:16 PM Title: Sunday

I was hoping for more of a continuation from the previous chapter, this chapter did not feel like an ending but that's ok. Leaves the option to come back. Pretty good story overall. I'm ready for your next one, the preview has me pumped up! Thanks for writing great stuff for us

Author's Response: Yeah, this chapter is actually how I envisioned the story ending all along; although, I didn’t initially have a sequel in mind when I started, but given the direction the rest of the story went, a sequel certainly could be in the works. I’m also ready to move on to other projects, as my two short stories need to get knocked out before I start the major work on my novel.

Reviewer: Dawger2 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 23 2024 6:11 PM Title: Saturday

It's sad too see another great series ending especially right when Julia and Natalie are now completely on the same page. I hope this gets a sequel or spin off or something

Author's Response:

Well, I’m certainly glad you liked the story. I will say is that this chapter was how I always envisioned this story ending…although, I hadn’t initially intended on writing a sequel, with the story being set at the beginning of the summer and the introduction of the neighbor characters, it certainly leads to sequel possibilities. I still may add an epilogue that will leave the story even more open to sequel possibilities and the direction I’d envision it taking, but that would be all for quite some time with all the other projects I want to get to. I imagine the next novel I plan to write is going to take at least a year to even get close to completion, along with the short, side stories I’d like to write and post.

With enough interest, I will write a sequel, but I will make sure it’s of a much higher quality.

Reviewer: Inari The Floof Signed [Report This]
Date: December 13 2023 1:42 AM Title: Friday Evening Pt.5

Once again, it is I Inari! Loved the chapter, poor Tim everything seems like it will always go against him. However Aunt Julia did invoke Murphy's Law so now hopefully Tim gets out unscathed and happy. I'm looking forward to the, possibly, last chapter to see the conclusion of his adventure. Can't wait to read more of your works!!!!! Hope you're having a wonderful holiday season! Keep it up I love it all!-Inari

Author's Response:

Yes, I know that things keep going badly for Tim, but that’s kinda the point to the story: it’s practice to help perfect the scenarios I want to include in my longer works. Ultimately, I still want this to feel like a complete and well-written story, but I also know some people just tune in for the good parts😉.

As always, thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Storyreader21 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 12 2023 5:22 PM Title: Friday Evening Pt.5

So Julia knows where Tim is. But she also invoked Murphy's law when she thought that last line. I wonder if Tim will escape by getting out from under his mom without Julie seeing or by getting sucked into his mom's butt so Julie thinks there is nothing left.

Author's Response: Well, what I can tell you is that the last chapter is Saturday; the active events of Friday night have concluded, so you’ll find out Tim’s fate at the story’s conclusion.

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed [Report This]
Date: December 06 2023 1:45 PM Title: Friday Evening Pt.4

So good to hear from you again! And again, you surprise me with how
creative your scenarios are. Creative, that’s the word I think better describes your writing and makes your unaware scenarios so unique.

That extends to the characters relationships – you are very thoughtful of the
build up on the surrounding and the many sensations it arouses on the characters: big and small, you are able to show, not tell, leaving space for us, the readers, to wonder about what comes next.

This ability helps builds up to great inner dialogues, like the one at the begining (where you tell us a little about Tim’s situation and own view of
himself), followed by the emitional turmoil on the sink scene - Will he survive? Will he make it? How? When?… This keeps us invested and thinking. Makes your stories one of the best parts of this site.

Since you are wrapping things up and tihis is a practice, no theories this time - but thinking about Tim and McKenzie, what their previous dynamic was and what it became after him shrinking, how did they meet in the first place… all that might help in a future project (and giga mother… giga Natalie trying to find her son… kkkk the ideas just keep popping!).

Relax and don’t forget to take care of yourself while writing.

As always, thanks for writing and sharing! You are a hero! Stay safe!

Author's Response:

Glad to be posting again; it’s been almost a month since my last chapter:

     I always like to have unique scenarios and actions instead of just the same old feet, tits, ass, etc., and I like to be creative and try new things, especially in the unaware genre. I find that every reader is different, and what one person likes or is into, someone else may not like, so any chance I have to vary the scenarios in my stories I like to explore.

     While my plots and stories are usually action and dialogue driven, sometimes you need to hear a character’s inner thoughts to help explain and express their emotions, and the inner dialogue is something I like to use from time to time.

     As far as the Tim and McKenzie dynamic that I know people are dying to hear more of, I think it’s important to remind everyone that even though they’re only about 4 years apart in age, for teenagers, that’s enough to put them into two different worlds: Tim’s still in high school, and McKenzie, despite being the quintessential girl-next-door, is in college, so the odds of anything happening between them is low. They really don’t have a lot in common, and despite Tim’s crush and her involvement in the events over the past week, McKenzie really hadn’t given him much thought before now.

     Of course, one can never tell what kind of effect finding a tiny person will have on a person, regardless of their age difference, so you never know…😉

You’re one of my most avid readers and reviewers, and I’m always happy to hear from you. Thanks for all your support!