Reviewer: TerryLarka Signed [Report This]
Date: September 06 2023 2:20 AM Title: Fun with a Monkey's Paw

Hilarious premise. At least with genies, they aren't always depicted as screwing the wisher over, so it's understandable to be naïve around them. But a literal monkey's paw? C'mon, that's its whole deal! Silly witches.

I love the banter in this one, especially between Jessica and Carmella. I would've liked to have seen a more gradual escalation between Jessica and Thad in the bedroom rather than just jumping straight to sex (I was expecting more from the lego set, seemed like a fun way of flustering Thad before she really got big), but this is a more light-hearted one-shot, so I get not wanting to drag things out.

Shoutouts to random middle aged man w/ camcorder. Probably my favorite joke in this even before I realized who he was a reference to.

Overall, a lot of fun!

Author's Response:

Yeah I didn't want to spend too much time on the romance for this one, it's a pretty silly little tale. Also yeah a literal monkey's paw should be enough of a red flag, but give them some slack, they only saw the simpsons episode!

Reviewer: mowza Signed [Report This]
Date: February 07 2023 1:29 AM Title: Fun with a Monkey's Paw

This one was a lot of fun lol


Author's Response:

Thanks, it was a silly one but I enjoyed myself.

Reviewer: purplereader Signed [Report This]
Date: February 05 2023 5:42 AM Title: Fun with a Monkey's Paw

A fun read 

Definitely had a laugh with the jokes in this story 

Thanks for throwing this growth enthusiast a bone. Your use of this element is great even in your previous stories 

Excellent work as always

Author's Response:

You're welcome! I like doing one silly one shots and I'm glad people like them too.

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed [Report This]
Date: February 04 2023 9:40 AM Title: Fun with a Monkey's Paw

Great little (or should I say big) one shot! 
The focus on growth instead of shrinking was a nice change. Would love to see more growth-focused tales from you in the future.

Author's Response:

Thanks, I usually do shrinking or just naturally big giants, I find growth can be a little harder to sustain over longer stories but it does great in one shot scenarios.

Reviewer: GentleFan Signed [Report This]
Date: February 04 2023 6:26 AM Title: Fun with a Monkey's Paw

This was a lot of fun! You should do more growth stories in the future.

Author's Response:

I'll try, shrink stories are easier for me to get in the groove of, not to say that I don't sometimes have good ideas for growth.