Reviews For Bee Happy
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Reviewer: titanic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 03 2023 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 1

Fun one shot, Carl is living the dream.

"how do the fucking bees have a tiny human and I don’t!?"  lmao, get rekt Renna. Stereotypically cruel elves getting their comeuppance: still funny.



Author's Response:

All things considered I think Renna still came out pretty good lol, I'm sure the bees will share their human now and then.

Reviewer: WookieWizard Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 09 2023 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 1

This was such a great story! Creative, sexy, funny, and a total page turner!

I'll be reading plenty of your stuff going forward! Well done. Would give it 100 stars out of 5 if I could.



Author's Response:

Thank you! If you liked this one the other monstergirl one-shots are pretty similar in tone, in particular Slimed and Things Can Happen When You Have a Pet Lamia

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed [Report This]
Date: January 28 2023 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 1

What will happen to this world like 300 years later? I feel there would be humans with magical shrinking guns hunting elfs for a change.

Would be fun to read a story in modern magical setting.



Author's Response:

I think by that point humans and elves will have probably reached some kind of understanding, the Empire is generally trending towards a more tolerant society, and while I don't see them ever really trying to conquer the elves they'll probably reach some kind of peace with them once the elves mellow out a bit. What a magitech society in this world looks like in the far future is too far off to really guess I think.

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 27 2023 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 1

I love that the first shrinking attempt was a repeat of the garter lamia story.



Author's Response:

Yeah if you own tiny monstergirls you should probably just avoid tea lol

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: January 26 2023 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 1

He should consider selling royal jelly, I'm sure humans have a demand for it...


I vaguely remember some story of yours with humans fearing that the big bad elves were coming to shrink them, I read a bit put it on my todo list for some reason - let's just say after reading this story I feel that I should have read the others sooner :D



Author's Response:

I try not to have too much interconnection between them so that people don't have to read them all to enjoy individual ones, that said the "elves trying to shrink the humans" trope is pretty strong in a lot of the stories where the elves appear lol.

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed [Report This]
Date: January 26 2023 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 1

It's actually unrealistic being poor while having a product like that. Something rare like beegirls honey will be priceless among nobles and royalty. Unless it's a "kingdom of dummies" where nobles have 0 money after dealing with a lich. Product is still invaluable for export tho.

It's impossible to be poor unless your business sense is severely lacking.



Author's Response:

Carl's a nice guy but I think you're right this his business sense is pretty poor lol. That said he'll be making plenty of cash once it gets out among the elves that he has a rare and valuable alchemical ingredient in abundance.

Reviewer: Stehlampe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 26 2023 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 1

What a story! It was funny, well written... Simply beeautiful. Can't get enough of your monster girl stories.  Do you know what type you're gonna write next about?

PS: The beginning of the war-speech of the queen first sounded like the speech of the major from Hellsing ultimate and I thought NO WAY. :D



Author's Response:

Yeah it's part of the Major's speech from hellsing lol. I don't have another monstergirl story planned right now, this one was a request. My next story is probably going to be another one shot in a more modern setting so probably no monstergirls lol.

Reviewer: bogcjg Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 26 2023 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 1

Love this story so much i love fantasy novels and this is fun to read please keep it going thanks 



Author's Response:

This one's meant as a one shot, but I have a lot of fantasy stories with monstergirls, elves, orcs, and the like, you can find them listed under the series entry for this story.

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 26 2023 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 1

I’ll be (or bee?) honest, couldn’t really get into the hole bee girl thing. Loved the interactions with Oriana/Renna though. Happy to see you returning to larger size differences.

How small did Carl end up shrinking by the way? I’m guessing he must’ve been pretty small if even the bee girls towered over him

Author's Response:

About 3/4 an inch, drone bee girls are 1 inch tall, soldier bees 2, and the queen is a giant among them at 5

Reviewer: lightwing Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 26 2023 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 1

Another adorable story.  I also liked that Hellsing reference to the major's speech.  How nice that the bee girls and the elf got to share their prize.  A happy (harem) ending is great!  And Oriana is much more than she seems.  Have you got some future story in mind for her?

At this point what other monster girl races are left?  You could a dragon story where a giant dragon girl takes a cute human as her treasure.  Or maybe giant angels and demon girls competing to influence mortals more.  Whatever you choose to do, I'm sure it'll be just as wholesome and lewd as the other stories in this setting.



Author's Response:

I've been thinking of a sort of origin story for the Empire as a whole with the first Emperor and such which Oriana would feature in, so yeah she is more than just a normal druid.

As far as demons and angels my story Welcome to Hell already covered them, though not in this particular setting.

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 26 2023 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 1

I think this may be your biggest harem yet.



Author's Response:

I suppose by sheer numbers yes you're right lol

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