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Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: February 01 2023 3:36 PM Title: II: The Hypnotist's Con

A fellow vim user? Anyway solid chapter!

:wq




Author's Response:

Hey, thanks for reading! It means a lot.

I don't use vim though, just used the word as a synonym for life force. Sorry to disappoint you there. :P

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: January 25 2023 9:38 PM Title: I: Sewer Creature

First of all, as someone who has never written a single chapter, organizing your 1st story as a bunch of mostly independent chapters is imho a damn good idea.

Good job with the first chapter.

Author's Response:

Thanks! Figured this was a good way to practice writing without putting too much pressure on creating a larger narrative.

Reviewer: bogcjg Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 24 2023 9:41 PM Title: I: Sewer Creature

Great story love it so far



Author's Response:

Thank you very much! Hope you'll like the next one too.

Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 24 2023 9:21 PM Title: I: Sewer Creature

Its a good star. Solid. 

Considering the number of posile combos or other stores around, bet someone uses tinies in there cloths, jewelry, or heels. Or keeps them as pets in a tararium or such. 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Keeping tinies as pets is a classic setup, I'll consider it. I'll need to come up with a new spin on that idea first, though, so it might be a while before I get to that.

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