Date: February 12 2023 3:36 AM Title: I: Sewer Creature
Man, now I want a forty foot sewer monster to raise! <3
Sorry, this review is super overdue. I love this story. The premise from the summary was an instant hook. The first chapter was delightfully fantastical and unexpectedly wholesome. I'm really glad to have picked this up and am looking forward to reading the next two chapters.
Author's Response:
Hey, thanks so much! I'm very happy to hear that people are enjoying my writing, that's what I do it for.
Here's hoping you'll like the next chapters too!
Date: February 01 2023 3:36 PM Title: II: The Hypnotist's Con
A fellow vim user? Anyway solid chapter!
:wq
Author's Response:
Hey, thanks for reading! It means a lot.
I don't use vim though, just used the word as a synonym for life force. Sorry to disappoint you there. :P
Date: January 25 2023 9:38 PM Title: I: Sewer Creature
First of all, as someone who has never written a single chapter, organizing your 1st story as a bunch of mostly independent chapters is imho a damn good idea.
Good job with the first chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Figured this was a good way to practice writing without putting too much pressure on creating a larger narrative.
[Report This]Date: January 24 2023 9:41 PM Title: I: Sewer Creature
Great story love it so far
Author's Response:
Thank you very much! Hope you'll like the next one too.
[Report This]Date: January 24 2023 9:21 PM Title: I: Sewer Creature
Its a good star. Solid.
Considering the number of posile combos or other stores around, bet someone uses tinies in there cloths, jewelry, or heels. Or keeps them as pets in a tararium or such.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Keeping tinies as pets is a classic setup, I'll consider it. I'll need to come up with a new spin on that idea first, though, so it might be a while before I get to that.