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Date: November 30 2016 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 1

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Reviewer: Sockmonster Signed [Report This]
Date: January 01 2014 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 1

I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH! Very well written! And the girl is chubby to boot! Please continue!

Reviewer: OneGenericWord Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 01 2013 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 1

I LOVE this story. Very few good stories of this size pop up, and yet yours takes the crown.

Please continue, I think I speak for many of us when I say there is a lot of support for this work.

Reviewer: grimehead Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 04 2012 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 1

Hey, what's up, Survivor? I'm that guy who always compliments you on /d/(and always asks about your wife since you brought up that scenario with the milkshake). I really like the story so far. Hope more smells and good dialogue is on the way with maybe some butt stuff too. I heard you saying you'd write more if you had the time off from work and while I, myself, am below the poverty line I'd be willing to send a few dollars your way as payment for what you've already written if you'd let me.

Reviewer: TiniestofSparks Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 04 2012 11:51 AM Title: Chapter 4



Hey I just wanted to reassure you that this chapter was the hottest yet. Bellybutton exploration and tummy pudge are two themes that are in short supply in this genre, and you've effectively set the bar damn high.


This was my favorite chapter, the sounds of digestion, and that description of a building sized movement, really made for some steamy visuals.


Hope you continue!


Reviewer: Raiza Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 09 2012 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 3

Like where this is heading, looking forward to more.

Reviewer: zephilia Signed [Report This]
Date: October 08 2012 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 3

Love the story, hope you decide to finish it one day

Reviewer: AdamX Signed [Report This]
Date: October 05 2012 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 3

I kind of dig this one.


She's slowly going from caring/remorseful to bratty tyrant.

Reviewer: Wolf Signed [Report This]
Date: December 12 2011 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 1

also, dont add all the tags, only the oes actualy in the story.

Reviewer: Wolf Signed [Report This]
Date: December 12 2011 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 2

far to short

Reviewer: underherheels Signed [Report This]
Date: December 22 2010 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 2

you should imput some high heels! but VERY good story so far! keep up the good work!

Reviewer: tinyonej Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 07 2010 10:16 AM Title: Chapter 2


Reviewer: mrcool Signed [Report This]
Date: July 13 2010 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 2

I really like this story. I really hope you continue it. I also absolutely love your other story "A Matter of Trust." I hope you continue that one too! Keep writing, you're a great author.

Reviewer: busdriver Signed [Report This]
Date: March 29 2010 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 2


Reviewer: TMR Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 31 2010 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 2

very descriptive, and i cant wait for whats next, it is mysterious...

Reviewer: danshrunkenman Signed [Report This]
Date: January 28 2010 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 2

Amazing keep writing please

Reviewer: rubber Signed [Report This]
Date: September 27 2009 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 2

nice start

Reviewer: aaron Signed [Report This]
Date: September 26 2009 10:53 AM Title: Chapter 1

getting interesting keep going. how bout making him an inch and a half? that would make him a better toy, foot massager, toe-nail painter, etc.. also could she be gentle? well guess thats it anyways.. like where your story is headed. aaron

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