[Report This]Date: May 29 2023 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 1: Welcome to the Rest of Your Life!
This story is truly incredible; one of my favorite introductions. I noticed you didn't get any reviews on your second chapter so just wanted to say it was excellent as well. I really hope you continue, I always love the realism-type scenarios which aren't entirely about snuff and sex with a real sense of horror and fear at the outcome, plus a meaningful story. Really hope you continue this. All the best.
Date: January 14 2023 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 1: Welcome to the Rest of Your Life!
Great introductory chapter. The story feels real. Looking forward to the reasons this is X rated. The massage was hot.
Date: January 13 2023 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 1: Welcome to the Rest of Your Life!
I LOVE this! Such an original premise and great mounting tension.
Date: January 13 2023 9:28 AM Title: Chapter 1: Welcome to the Rest of Your Life!
Forgive my critique, but it makes no sense to be restrained and have an IV inserted when one is about to shrink, unless one wants to be quartered and impaled. Otherwise, interesting start.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your comment :) This particular point will make more sense in the later chapters.
[Report This]Date: January 13 2023 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 1: Welcome to the Rest of Your Life!
The setup for this story was interesting, I’m intrigued! A few typos, but otherwise easy to read and engaging. I’d like to see this story continue.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the feedback!
[Report This]Date: January 12 2023 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 1: Welcome to the Rest of Your Life!
And interesting start.
Author's Response:
Thanks!