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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 28 2022 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 5: Freedom!

So, let me get this straight.  He's no longer subject to death by frostbite or starvation.  But, the smell of good food still gives him an appetite.  And he can still shiver with enough cold to prefer a good open fire (or sunlamp or whatever) to provide comfortable warmth



Author's Response:

I must’ve overlooked something while editing, he no longer gets hungry and is impervious to cold, but prefers warmth. If I had him getting hungry, I must’ve skipped over that while,editing.

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