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Reviewer: BlackTearDrinker Signed [Report This]
Date: December 28 2022 1:15 AM Title: They're Gonna Put Me in the Movies

Nice to see the story continuing I'm not want to know how it feels to have writer's block but from reading stories from multiple authors it takes some time but they eventually come around to thinking of something new as us readers we all understand that happens to the best of authors thank you for coming back to it looking forward to see what next you have up here sleeve

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Thank you!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 27 2022 10:54 PM Title: They're Gonna Put Me in the Movies

Just read all 8 chapters! 

Wow, Monika is amazing! I love how playful she is! So playful that I’m not sure if she forgot the growth potion on purpose or not. 

The first few chapters really brought me into this story. The way she playfully uses her feet around him, casually putting her feet in Timmy’s lap, and even just teasing him with her texts and outfits. 

I also like how the shrinking potions seem to fit the story. Usually I would question where she would get them or how they were made, but her mysterious yet playful behavior makes it all seem natural and I’m all for it. 

The scene where she sits on his face was probably my favorite scene. Timmy has been eyeing her ass this whole time and now she gets to use him as a seat. She stated that she would use him as a cushion again and it hasn’t happened yet, so I’m excited to see when it will happen next. 

For the shrinking scene, how tall was he when she smuggled him in the plane? I’m guessing a few inches tall, maybe 3 inches? I think once scene you said half of her foot so maybe he is taller. 

Also, getting trapped in a sexy ass for a long plane ride sounds awesome, although I’m sure it could get quite sweaty, haha! 

I’m looking forward to more playful encounters between them and I can’t wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I'm glad you're enjoying the story.

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