Date: December 13 2022 5:08 AM Title: Monika Takes a Seat
Absolutely fantastic story. Truly TOP NOTCH!
First, and this is my personal pet peeve, your grammar and writing have almost none, if any mistakes (I don't think I really came across any). That leads to an easy to read story that all can enjoy. No need to clarify, just an easy read to be enjoyed.
As to your German to English and visa versa interpretations, that's not easy and seldom perfect to do. Though you are doing a very good job of translations yourself in order to convey intent, you are doing well.
Your story content, a boy
worshiping a German maid's feet, and possibly all of her, is a terrific
story. Translation and interpretation need more closely checked
examination though.
On a personal level, I too have a story I have yet to post of a Swedish Maid, and the house holds Matriarch, her step son just entering her house, and the step son taking fault for a mistake (breaking a piece of vase) by the well endowed Swedish Maid.
If I ever post that story, kindly acknowledge I had a similar story in the works. Regardless, great story on your part. Hope to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words. I'm glad you're enjoying the story!