[Report This]Date: December 29 2022 12:51 AM Title: God Damn those Blue Shells!
Really enjoy this story! please include more unaware in shoe or maybe Monika realises the durability and takes him for a ride in her running trainers. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Not making any promises, but the trainers idea has floated through my head before ;)
[Report This]Date: December 14 2022 4:25 PM Title: God Damn those Blue Shells!
So I like to tell you that you can writing is good. And I was like the size tag. But when it you updated it and went smaller I lost me. Hay you write your story the way you want. So you do your thing. You can't make everyone happy. Have a good day.
Author's Response:
Sorry that the micro chapters aren't to your taste. Hope you at least enjoyed the story up until that point.
Date: December 11 2022 4:43 PM Title: God Damn those Blue Shells!
Monika reminded me a little of one of my own characters who is called 'Monica' and is German too! It was a cute thing to see another character with such resemblances! <3
Also, good stuff, I can't avoid picturing Monika as Vicky from The Fairy Oddparents since she is like a caretaker for Timmy xD
Author's Response:
Lol, funny coincidence! Hope you're enjoying the story
Date: December 11 2022 12:58 PM Title: God Damn those Blue Shells!
This is just perfect, I really like the premise and the build up is phenomenal. I can't wait for more to come.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much!
Date: December 11 2022 2:07 AM Title: God Damn those Blue Shells!
Hey, just so you know about midway through the chapter it gets to the ending and then starts over again from an earlier part. I like how things are shaping up so far though.
Author's Response:
Ah, shit! I made a mistake when copying the text over to the website. Thanks for pointing it out to me and I'm glad you're enjoying the story!