Date: February 20 2023 4:27 PM Title: Monika likes Wine
Great so far, will it be finished?
Author's Response:
Thank you, and yes, it will be. I've just hit a slump.
[Report This]Date: December 29 2022 12:51 AM Title: God Damn those Blue Shells!
Really enjoy this story! please include more unaware in shoe or maybe Monika realises the durability and takes him for a ride in her running trainers. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Not making any promises, but the trainers idea has floated through my head before ;)
Date: December 28 2022 1:15 AM Title: They're Gonna Put Me in the Movies
Nice to see the story continuing I'm not want to know how it feels to have writer's block but from reading stories from multiple authors it takes some time but they eventually come around to thinking of something new as us readers we all understand that happens to the best of authors thank you for coming back to it looking forward to see what next you have up here sleeve
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: December 27 2022 10:54 PM Title: They're Gonna Put Me in the Movies
Just read all 8 chapters!
Wow, Monika is amazing! I love how playful she is! So playful that I’m not sure if she forgot the growth potion on purpose or not.
The first few chapters really brought me into this story. The way she playfully uses her feet around him, casually putting her feet in Timmy’s lap, and even just teasing him with her texts and outfits.
I also like how the shrinking potions seem to fit the story. Usually I would question where she would get them or how they were made, but her mysterious yet playful behavior makes it all seem natural and I’m all for it.
The scene where she sits on his face was probably my favorite scene. Timmy has been eyeing her ass this whole time and now she gets to use him as a seat. She stated that she would use him as a cushion again and it hasn’t happened yet, so I’m excited to see when it will happen next.
For the shrinking scene, how tall was he when she smuggled him in the plane? I’m guessing a few inches tall, maybe 3 inches? I think once scene you said half of her foot so maybe he is taller.
Also, getting trapped in a sexy ass for a long plane ride sounds awesome, although I’m sure it could get quite sweaty, haha!
I’m looking forward to more playful encounters between them and I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I'm glad you're enjoying the story.
Date: December 17 2022 10:21 PM Title: Timmy (Sort of) Loses his Virginity
fantastic chapter! love how he loses his virginity and the subsequent EVENTS.
i'm one of those weirdos who adores toilet stuff in gts stories, so if your imagination wants to go there, i'm all for it!!!
Author's Response:
Glad you're enjoying! This kind of stuff isn't normally in my wheelhouse but I felt like going for it, hope it paid off.
[Report This]Date: December 17 2022 4:14 AM Title: Timmy (Sort of) Loses his Virginity
What a way to lose one's virginity!!!
Why wouldn't Timmy want to go back between Monika's ass cheeks now that her bowels are empty? Wouldn't this be the perfect time to crawl back within her thong and snuggle up to her asshole {though even before she went and emptied her rear end dumpster would also be a great time to worm himself against her anus}?
Wouldn't Monika find little Timmy snuggled against her asshole, within her thong, to be amusing and cute?
Is Timmy going to confess to Monika he lost his virginity to her asshole? Shouldn't this be something he tells her freely out of fairness and devotion; or even by mistake telepathically?
Wondering where Timmy is kept as Monika travels about Germany.
BTW, nice images you linked to how Monika looks. VERY SEXY {for a cartoon}!!!
Author's Response:
Guess you'll have to find out ;)
[Report This]Date: December 14 2022 4:25 PM Title: God Damn those Blue Shells!
So I like to tell you that you can writing is good. And I was like the size tag. But when it you updated it and went smaller I lost me. Hay you write your story the way you want. So you do your thing. You can't make everyone happy. Have a good day.
Author's Response:
Sorry that the micro chapters aren't to your taste. Hope you at least enjoyed the story up until that point.
[Report This]Date: December 14 2022 4:56 AM Title: Deutsch Oven
Love the foot worship / religious devotion to Monika's feet, and Monika's Ass Face sat upon Timmy.
Hopefully Timmy becomes Monika's devote foot and ass worshiper.
Great story so far.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: December 13 2022 10:58 PM Title: A New Method of Transportation
love this German milf-esque scenario and story!
would you describe Monika's feet as having high arches, really curvy?
thank gott for the butt stuff. hope he gets even smaller and she does more bad smooshycum foot and ass stuff to him, and farts!
Author's Response:
Thank you, glad you're enjoying it! And yes, I would say your description is accurate.
Date: December 13 2022 6:04 AM Title: Österreich
She does a mild tease and he starts crying..
Date: December 13 2022 5:08 AM Title: Monika Takes a Seat
Absolutely fantastic story. Truly TOP NOTCH!
First, and this is my personal pet peeve, your grammar and writing have almost none, if any mistakes (I don't think I really came across any). That leads to an easy to read story that all can enjoy. No need to clarify, just an easy read to be enjoyed.
As to your German to English and visa versa interpretations, that's not easy and seldom perfect to do. Though you are doing a very good job of translations yourself in order to convey intent, you are doing well.
Your story content, a boy
worshiping a German maid's feet, and possibly all of her, is a terrific
story. Translation and interpretation need more closely checked
examination though.
On a personal level, I too have a story I have yet to post of a Swedish Maid, and the house holds Matriarch, her step son just entering her house, and the step son taking fault for a mistake (breaking a piece of vase) by the well endowed Swedish Maid.
If I ever post that story, kindly acknowledge I had a similar story in the works. Regardless, great story on your part. Hope to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words. I'm glad you're enjoying the story!
Date: December 11 2022 4:43 PM Title: God Damn those Blue Shells!
Monika reminded me a little of one of my own characters who is called 'Monica' and is German too! It was a cute thing to see another character with such resemblances! <3
Also, good stuff, I can't avoid picturing Monika as Vicky from The Fairy Oddparents since she is like a caretaker for Timmy xD
Author's Response:
Lol, funny coincidence! Hope you're enjoying the story
Date: December 11 2022 12:58 PM Title: God Damn those Blue Shells!
This is just perfect, I really like the premise and the build up is phenomenal. I can't wait for more to come.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much!
Date: December 11 2022 2:07 AM Title: God Damn those Blue Shells!
Hey, just so you know about midway through the chapter it gets to the ending and then starts over again from an earlier part. I like how things are shaping up so far though.
Author's Response:
Ah, shit! I made a mistake when copying the text over to the website. Thanks for pointing it out to me and I'm glad you're enjoying the story!