Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: December 06 2022 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 3: A Shitty End

Quite the fun story.  The overall concept is enjoyable to read about. 

The parts written in Spanish that need translating were kinda fun to copy-clip into a Spanish to English translator, though some of the translations are confusing {e.g. "tresero" = "3" or "third player", does it mean the next person after the first two?}, they kind of made it like a detective story the reader has to solve.  An interesting, and admittedly fun while confusing level added to your story.

My only complaint is that Naysha and Wendy flushed him away, rather than reuse him again and again.

Nice story.