Date: December 29 2022 8:57 PM Title: Why can't we live together?
I hope the Holiday bustle calms down for you; still waiting for the next chapter before I voice my own thoughts on the cliffhanger (waiting until you introduce certain plot elements so I can give you a proper shout-out to give you more views; getting reviews from that would require users to register an account here).
Your writing quality is akin to Jelly Tea, and it was crickets when he started putting pen to paper on this site. He built himself up a following by reposting his stories on Deviantart, and then he created a Twitter account to sort of act as an RSS feed for followers of his writing. Greenanon is also similar to you, and his reviewers are mostly from 4chan's /d/ gentle giantess board (right now, your story is mostly shrunken women, and the SW thread's community is somewhat small).
Cowgirls having their faces printed on milk bottles reminds me of a meme known as the 'Henton's Round Meal: Macaroni and Beef'. On its packaging is a photo of Davis for a contest 'Win a Visit with Davis'. So like with the idol handshake and photo campaigns in Japan, I'm imagining some milk bottle with a similar contest with a word bubble over the cowgirl "I'll come to you".
Date: December 05 2022 1:06 AM Title: Going Clubbing
Wow, if a ookamimimi is 9 feet tall when a nekomimi like Tanji is 2 feet tall, I'm curious how big something like an ushimimi (cowgirl) would be in this world. Would be funny if the expression 'milk truck' is literal rather than figurative when referring to the bosom of a holstein-girl. Also, Cinnamon... Mia is really cute. Depicting cuteness is incredibly difficult, but I feel you nailed it with her; she's both adorable and amusing. Your skills as a writer make it easy for me to visualise the various scenes as illustrations.
We're already at chapter 4, and I'm already intrigued and captivated by this world you're sharing. If this were a book, it would be a real page-turner that's hard to put down. It's the perfect blend of size-fetish science fiction. Hopefully others feel the same way; if it ever feels like the reader response here is akin to cricket chirps, I'll be more than glad to give you a shout-out elsewhere to help draw in more readers. You have something really good going on here.
I am glad that you are enjoying the story! As this is my first attempt at writing a long-form tale like this, I am happy that it is going well.
I find your idea of cowgirls being used to produce milk very funny. The main character could for example see a little image of a cowgirl on the bottles of milk he drinks every day and realize that it is actually a ushimimi milk instead of a cutesy marketing character.
Wow, thank you for the offer! I would be grateful if you could give me a shout-out. Seeing feedback is always a great motivator to keep going.
I appreciate your continued support.
Date: November 29 2022 12:42 AM Title: Look What The Human's Dragged In
As someone who is always seeking kemonomimi plus size-fetish, this story has caught my attention, and your story-telling abilities thus far are quite nice. If you can keep up the 3-4 day chapter schedule, checking this page may very well become part of my daily routine.
I'm curious what kind of story you have in mind, since you're only updating the tags as the story progresses. The fact the protagonist seems unphased by the existence of the Japanese catgirl gives me the impression animal girls are normal in this universe, so this isn't going to be like Sage_of_the_Forlorn_Path's 'Master! Master!' serial where the protagonist is trying to keep his ever-increasing harem of animal girls a secret. Animal girls being a normal part of society has a lot of potential. I'm guessing based on the title, this is going to be 'shrunken woman' or 'amazon' since the apartment needs to remain big enough to house all the animal girls, though your previous story with the nano tag makes me hopeful extreme size difference is in the cards in the future (i.e. cat and mouse play, full body tongue baths, etc.). I'm unfamiliar with any Japanese legends or media that use Tanji as a name for a cat, and people who have named their cat that tend to give it to male cats. Though, with her foul mouth 'poor bastard' as her English equivalent of 'binbou-yarou', Tanji strikes me as a tomboy cat girl with a wagamama body. Curious how this sort of relationship is going to develop in the coming chapters.
In any case, thank you for writing this. Keep up the good work.
Thank you a lot for the comment!
You are right in your assumption. I am hoping to add a lot of different sized girls - some big, some small, and some even smaller.
I am still new to writing, so I might need to iron out the details. But the basic premise is that animal girls exist in the universe, except that they are extremely rare and seen as a novelty for the rich. Micheal really doesn’t know about any of this, not only because it’s a relatively new trend, but also because he came from a farm in southern USA. He’s an outside in this world’s version of American West Coast which is under higher Japanese influence. But he’s heard enough to not immediacy assume that some sorcery is at play
Once again, I really appreciate the kind words.