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Reviewer: kbDArt Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 16 2023 7:21 PM Title: Summer at Sweet Sixteen

Really like this cute story TS. You have really done a good job of injecting sweetness and innocence into the setting here. Only reason I didn't give it 10 stars is because I think it was missing just a bit of oomph around the actual voring itself, but I really liked the pacing and storyline here.



Author's Response:

Thanks. Yes, I'm definitely running out of ways to do the oomph.

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