The return of the goat !

A long chapter, and still really well written, can't wait for the next one !

The return of the goat !

A long chapter, and still really well written, can't wait for the next one !

I am just so glad this story is not dead!

I really love this story because it's very rare to see a size fetish story where the protagonist is willingly being shrunken down, yet the protagonist doesn't have a size fetish himself. Not only so, no one in the story actually had a size fetish at all (maybe except Alice and Nikki who are developing one lol).

As a result, the story really "normalizes" the idea of a person being shrunken down. As in, the main premise isn't that the characters involves are trying to do some kinky play or fantasy fulfilling. Everyone treats being shrunken down so calmly, as if it's just like "I'm gonna give my room to my cousin and sleep on the living room sofa". I think this is what makes this story so unique and fresh. Since most size fetish stories will follow the pattern of either "protagonist is unwillingly shrunken" or "protagonist is willingly shrunken because he is horny".

This also means everyone in the story treats the protagonist Remy as a "normal person", instead of a "tiny" or something sub-human. Remy is also continuing living his everyday life, unshrinking everyday to go to school and outside, and also having some same sized interactions with Alice and Lori. I really like this sense of feeling of "equal yet also unequal" in the power dynamic. As in, between Alice and Remy, Remy actually have more of the "soft social power" because it is Alice who got a place to live for free, placing the burden on Remy. Meanwhile, physical power wise, Remy is so powerless compared to Alice when he is shrunken. Mixing them together, this creates a really peculiar power balance, where Remy should "be in charge", but his "being in charge" depends on the whimsical mood and excitedness of Alice. To add on to this, no one in the story actually treats Remy as "sub-human" intentionally. Alice can sometimes get excited and become pushy when playing with Remy, but I don't think she have any malicious intents to bully Remy into submission.

All in all, I really wish this series continues on for longer.

Interesting chapter. Is it bad that I hope the weight is starting to lessen not because Remy is growing bigger, but because he is growing even smaller, small enough that the he ends up stuck in a wrinkle in the foot?

Like they say: karma is a bitch. I am just stating the obvious but, man, it feels good from time to time: Alice can’t even complain since she is to blame for the whole ordeal - which is far from over.

Now, things didn’t turn out like I thought, but the interactions between micro Remy and god-like Lori were great albeit short. Any chance Remy will shrink more than 3 inches? He and Alice still have some reckoning to do.

I have the feeling we are we heading towards the finishing line, but
are we? You already have an idea for the end laid out?

Great chapter, with great interactions – the description of Remy’s perception... Good. Very good as always. No big theories this time… well, maybe one: Lori and her aunt decide to shrink Alice as punishment, but Remy is against it and a family fight begins.

There is also the possibility that, while Lori and her mother are making adjustments, a terrified Alice tries and shrinks both. You know, like a cornered animal would do – she will claim she did nothing wrong, that Remy has a foot fetish, that he loves her feet and that’s the reason he is so nice to her and should be hers…

Her what? Actually, weren't they meant for each other? Remy is just the right size...

A complete meltdown. She hates Lori, she hates her mother. She just
wants to “play” a little with little Remy. Yes, and “just for play let me see him naked, Nikki…”

I really can’t help myself when it comes to theories... But I also can’t wait to see what will come out of this family feud! Hate? Trauma? Love and foot fetish?? (yes, please!) More shrinking?? (yes, please!).

Hope my comment is useful. Thanks for writing and sharing! Stay safe and,
please, more Alice and Remy!

I feel like a broken record but I love your story. I hope you'll continue like that because it will certainly be a contender for one the best stories on the website so far.

great chapter

Sometimes I just get baffled at the amount of good stories this site has been producing along the last few years... it’s just impossible to comment as fast and as much as I would like. But I’ve been reading and wanting to comment on this story for quite a while now.

Big fan of Remy, Lori and Alice here and I agree with another comment: Alice can’t get away just because she back talked. 

And she won’t (I think). Even if you did not liked your sister or brother (which is not the case here, we know for a fact Lori is close and cares a lot for Remy), you would regard the person who puts him in danger as deranged or a criminal at the very least.

Am I saying Alice is a deranged criminal? No, I am saying that's how Lori must be seeing her right now. Not only she used and abused Remy, she took advantage of their trust.

As for Alice herself, I would say she doesn’t realize the meaning and, therefore, doesn’t really regreets her actions. She regreets being caught, she wants the yelling to stop. But she wanted to see Remy naked and she liked having him at her feet even as a speck.

The fact is Alice herself doesn't want to admit she is making advances towards Remy, but Lori is no fool and that’s why she insists on these two types of questions: why and what.

But the main question that remains is: will Remy be brought back right away or will he end up lost? Since both Lori and Alice are very emotional, I am betting their discussion will escalate and he will end up lost at the ground.

That’s a good thing because there is another layer here to explore: as I said before, Alice is not deranged. No, quite the opposite: Alice doesn’t think shrinking Remy was wrong because she thinks she is in control, meaning it’s all a game. Once Remy is lost and they can’t find him… 

And that’s not even the worse: what if they loose him and Lori thinks she crushed her brother without knowing? Seeing a angry Lori is bad, but a broken one… that’s when reality sinks in.

Now, for Remy it’s not about what he will do with Alice and Nikki and more about what he won’t do when he is back to normal. He’s been nothing but good to Alice and now I doubt he will even want to talk to any of them. Why should him when they saw him as a thing to play and not as a friend (much less family)? His silence towards Alice and her friend is more than justified and deserved since it would be the silence of a victim.

Well, that’s my theory for now. There is more I want to talk (that’s how invested I am in your characters and story) but the text is already big enough. 

Sorry for the big text and for any misspelling. Although I am fluent in english, it is not my primary language.

You have a gentle, funny and interesting story and I thank you from the bottom of my heart for sharing with us here. Please, more! MORE!

And so Lori gets involved...so cool. And Remy is still really tiny. I really hope something happens and Remy gets lost for more super tiny size scenarios. Especially if they are unaware ones.