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Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: December 09 2022 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 5 - A Rubber Duck Named Dan (Part 2 of 2)

Good to see I'm not the only one who's getting older ;)

As I usually don't reread the whole story, and therefore mostly skip this chapters (you know, they're just the introduction...), I didn't remember that he was fascinated by all of her so soon and I was SURE that she used her hand for the doctor.

Reviewer: randysavage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 08 2022 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 5 - A Rubber Duck Named Dan (Part 2 of 2)

I don’t remember the shower scene in the original story. But it was a great addition! Hopefully you have more additions coming, and more interactions with Brittany before she takes ownership!

Author's Response:

Shower scene was always there!  


Unlike the RR stories, I'm refraining from modifying this story, aside from typo correction.  I'm also considering removing the meta-gtsworld references toward the end. 

Reviewer: Shaman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 08 2022 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 5 - A Rubber Duck Named Dan (Part 2 of 2)

Well this was... hot. Feel sorry for Dan tho, but simultaniously I feel a bit jelly of course. Becky seems like a real dangerous person in the meantime, hope she'll at least be a bit more careful before she kills her little loofa

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