Date: November 18 2009 8:37 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm so ecstatic to see you continuing this story! I like how his ex is uping the ante, so to speak, and really going to ruin this poor, pathetic worm. To have his mother be the means of the demise of his self respect and manhood is just what I like to see in these sorts of stories. Whatever you do will be great, so my two cents is just that. I'd love to see his mother, either by instruction or through her own initiative, pick him up and slowly scrucnh him to one last orgasm. It would be an act of mercy before his ejaculating days cease. Also, do you plan to have his mother eventually end his life and then discover who it was that she'd destroyed? Or will she never discover that it's been him all along?
Author's Response: Thanks for the comments. My next chapter will probably be the end of the story, but it's a "fate" for the main character that I've been thinking of for a while.
Date: October 09 2009 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 1
BEST STORY EVER!
Please continue this you talented writer you.
Date: September 16 2009 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love this story, and I actually like the fact that the mother isn't aware. It adds to the angst of the character in a "if only she knew" sort of way. Keep up the good work!
[Report This]Date: September 14 2009 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
Positively a phenomenal story! I love it immensely. Whatever you do, it will be goldent. I myself would like to see a kind of twist ending, whre his mom reveals that she has known all along that it was him beneath her punishing, maternal toes and soles. Then, due to his non-compliance, his sentance increases to death, whereby she slowly and methodolically crushes him into a stain as she scrunches her toes over him. Again, whatever you end up doing, this is a fun, highly descriptive story!
[Report This]Date: September 12 2009 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 1
really good work as usual!