Date: August 27 2009 12:29 PM Title: Part 1
You don't skimp. And by that, I mean you are here relating an entire story, taking us on a journey, instead of quickly setting up a scenario and executing it. It is just amazing what you have done witht his in terms of structure. Also, the dialogue is realistic and enjoyable, I hear people and not...well, talking boxes that move the story forward. While this is not really my type of story (I am a fan of unaware/micro, and would be excited to see what you could do with that) I greatly enjoy this story and your writing, and hope to read more in the near future.
Date: August 26 2009 10:28 PM Title: Part 1
Oh... my... god.
Dude, this has got to be one of the most awesome GTS stories that I have ever had the pleasure to read! Not only is your writing superb, your plot possessive of a lot of momentum, but your characters are alive with believability!
Good lord, dude!
When you do continue, if one request could be made, could you be asked to give a more detailed description of Anne's feet? I mean, your heros are at them, so it sort of makes sense that they would be beholden to even the most minute of details!
Oh! And one of the guys...? An arch support for Anne, please?!
Either way, dude, absolutely amazing story! I will for certain, be watching you for more!
Date: August 26 2009 10:18 PM Title: Part 1
wow.. what an adventurous* and greatly written epic tale. congratulations!! well where to start.. the detailed discriptions of this new and fantastic world are phenomenal. also, love the fact that the people are indeed reduced to a figureine-esque size, fantastic. really enjoyed it, would definatly read chapter 2...
ps if your taking requests for future stories... would you be able to do almost the exatly same premise? except the fact that the "towering" girl wouldn't be nearly as malevolent. and more gentle, with a foot fetish. lol.
anyways one love.